HP: The Silver-Haired Witch and Her Know-It-All

They have their own personal settings but are not overly OOC. At least it makes me feel that they are not just playing house, and the story is complete. There is no time travel, the heroine is purely indigenous and she is Gryffindor! And a very different Gryffindor! Therefore, the heroine naturally joined the protagonist group from the beginning. The protagonist did not know the original work, so she only relied on calm analysis to change some of the original endings. I can feel that she is not a prophet, but she is thinking and doing more to change some things. Even a small thing will change the direction of the original work later, which will increase my sense of reality that she is actually living in the HP world. Their immature behavior or hesitation in the past also made me feel that they did not have a God's perspective and were very alive. They were experiencing and growing. Including this book, it really made me feel the suffocation of Voldemort's return. Umbridge's difficulties and DA's situation are very detailed. Voldemort's oppression can also be seen through the big actions of the Ministry of Magic. What happened to the protagonist's father later, and the crisis in the school. Even if the protagonist later breaks away from the trio, I can understand from different angles that this moment is the darkest time, a big crisis. This is really well written. This perspective always follows the protagonist. What the protagonist sees is what I see, which will increase my sense of investment. The emotional line is natural. I really like this kind of relationship that slowly falls into each other and finally becomes tacitly understood. However, it seems that the protagonist only focused on describing her identity as an "observer" in the third grade. The early foreshadowing was not so obvious, and there was a sense of abruptness. She suddenly emphasized that she was observing, and things got much better later on. The relationship between the two little ones was really clear, and they felt like an old wife and wife, but they lacked a bit of Gryffindor style. Impulsiveness and youthful energy, especially after the fifth grade, the two little ones talk like big philosophers and act like the Riddler, which made me a little tired. There are many repetitive descriptions, which are really obvious when listening to the book, such as explaining the Felixir, explaining why not telling Dumbledore, Neville's medicine is more effective than Bai Xian, the main theme is The words are pretty much the same, there is no need to write them multiple times, I thought I was reincarnated; following the perspective of the protagonist made me lose Harry's perspective. The key is that the author did not take this step in one stroke. As a result, it is not the protagonist who takes the lead or Harry who takes the lead. It makes me feel "why", but combined with the original work, I can understand it, such as D A still asked Harry to teach, saying that he had the most combat experience, but from my perspective, Harry had no experience. Instead, the protagonist was honed crazily. But Harry did have experience in the original work, but the author's lack of Harry's part made me feel resentful for the protagonist; there were more or less logic or language bugs, but I could ignore them. I was very happy to read it. I was able to find a serious story, a HP story that can be followed along with the overall story, and the characters were well drawn. Although it was very AI in the later stage, I was very happy to read it.

A well-written book with very detailed descriptions and personal settings. It would be nice to speed up the love line a little bit more

It looks good. Love it. Don't give up. 😢😢😢

Really very beautiful

Well written, you can read it