A New Student at Hogwarts

So far, it looks pretty good. Although the heroine's character is still a little unclear, and the reason why she was assigned to Slytherin is still unclear, your writing style makes up for this. It looks more comfortable. There are still many mysteries, about parents and life experience. I hope the author can continue to write it down. Oh, I still don't know who the other heroine is (I'm still guessing Eve at the moment). I hope the author can tell me. Otherwise, I'm wrong and the author is fully responsible 🥺 The last thing I hope is he. I can be cruel in the middle but the ending must be he, the author!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How should I put it, give me full marks first. It has the feel of HP world view, and the perspective is not the main plot of the original work that was criticized around the savior. Overall, it is quite good. But for the current update, I really can't help but want to say something heartfelt. The relationship between the two heroines is too similar to that of Snape and Lily shown in the movie. A simple summary is that the relationship sprouted from the dream-like encounter in childhood, and then they became unclear about the vague love that existed before, until the interfering suitor appeared. However, in the original book, Potter, the passionate and persistent pursuer, made Lily feel and understand love, while Snape was awkward and guarded his inexplicable self-esteem and loved Lily deeply, but he did not express or communicate and finally waited for loss. Regarding this book, I am going to pierce my heart. According to the normal development, Eve and Snape will end up just waiting. The person they like will definitely be chased away by someone who comes halfway, get married and have children. If it weren't for the double heroine tag, how could Eve win based on this reverse scenario? Her gender and personality are not as good as those of Ivan, not to mention their faces are almost the same. Deep love is indeed deep love, but if you don't express it and Ivan shows his love wildly, how can you be sure that the protagonist will not be moved.

It's great to watch, but this emotional scene doesn't seem to exist. At the moment, it feels like Eve has feelings for Su Nian, but she doesn't act on it. Ahhhhhhhhhh, it makes me anxious. I want to watch it 😢😢😢

It's slow-paced, and there aren't many toxic points at the moment. It's just what the Internet says, but in reality, who wouldn't want to watch an episode like this and watch two people floating in the water falling in love? The pace is slow, and the distance between the two protagonists is well controlled without any unreasonable plot, making it very comfortable to watch.

The plot is good, the emotional line is slow, but I quite like it. The daily secret thoughts are in line with the characters, and many HP references are too premature for local culture. I am still a little uncomfortable with it. The pace of this book is not bad.

It's very interesting. Although it tells a story about childhood, it is not the same as it is a copy of the Harry Potter story we know well. The mystery of the protagonist's life experience and the emotions really pull, pull, and pull again. It is very sour and very campus.

The plot has a very slow but jumping feel (referring to the time in the book) and the emotional line is also slow, but I like it very much, and the characters are well grasped. It's all right, but in reality, who doesn't want to see two pieces of wood pulling at each other? Why do I have to watch half of it, happily imagining when the author will finish it, and then I have a great meal and find out that the update has been discontinued? [Black man holding his head and yelling jpg]. Author, please come back and update, everyone can do anything 😢

It's very beautiful, but the update speed can't keep up with my reading speed, but the writing feels pretty good.

Nice! In the recently updated chapters, Su Nian and Eve are still a bit annoying. 🥰

It's still okay, but the emotional line is not very obvious. Come on 😘