I Became a Dementor

To be honest, the writing is very good and I quite like it. At least it looks good now, the characters are well developed, the logic is good, and the writing is good. Moreover, she is a shrewd and thoughtful dark heroine, with a cute personality that is a bit dull when it comes to emotions, coupled with the shaping and description of Luna and Harley. The creation of characters is not as simple as saying a few words to the protagonist, smiling or blushing like in other Tomato novels. It is reflected in many small details, which can only be said to be quite good. The most valuable thing is that there are not many traces of AI, except for occasional typos. I don't know why so few people read it. I hope the author can continue writing it.

First of all, it can be seen that for me, there are no poisonous points at the moment. Maybe I have been patient after taking too many poisons. At present, if I keep updating, there will be a long and long content. The second grade has not started yet. And the plot has a sense of stream of consciousness. It is indeed a fast-paced era and I can't bear to read long paragraphs. This depends on whether the author caters to the times or maintains his own personality. But I personally feel that it can be broken into short paragraphs. The emotional line is progressing slowly. It is more like trying to rewrite the process of a dementor gradually understanding human emotions deeply and gradually losing the indifference in his bones. At least for now, it feels more like best friends, but the three ladies are already very important.

It's pretty good, but the battle descriptions look weird. Some of the character names have been wrong recently. I feel like it was written in a hurry. It feels different from the previous dozens of chapters. It's handwritten, not AI, and the writing style is pretty good.

A very delicious book. From my point of view, the story of this book is very concise, without complicated plot. It revolves around the protagonist's step-by-step transformation from dementors to humans. The story between the protagonist and Harry and others is also very cute.

The settings are very interesting. Have you added the dnd settings? (I ran DND once) The character of the heroine is also worth chewing. She is still looking for a way to regain her humanity while trapped in divinity. It's just the lack of some descriptive words that makes me look a little uncomfortable.

I have read Chapter 21 so far, and I feel that the protagonist has something to do. The writing in the article does not give me a clear sense of purpose, which makes some content a bit confusing to me. It would be better if it could be explained more clearly. Updates are discontinued. The data is really not that good. Does the author want to start a new article? If so, you can give me a kick.

It would be too wild for Harry Potter to go to Slytherin, and there was no way Dumbledore would let her go.

It's very palatable. It's not a mindless story, and it's not all about romance. The heroine has her own thing to do. I hope she doesn't always suffer.

For the protagonist of the dark style, the attribute points of the protagonist can be mentioned. If the force value is too low, it is easy to feel frustrated. The heroine can be more ambiguous, that's the main focus.

Although long paragraphs of text are rare nowadays, it awakened my ancient memories and made me feel comfortable. After looking at it for so long, I found that the quality is very good. The exploration and other parts are very well written, and the battle of wits part is even better (I'm running out of words...). The shortcomings are that there are too few battles and not enough blood, but they are just trivial problems. Finally, lovely Luna, kind Luna 😳😳😳