Demon Journey: Flowers Bloom on the Other Shore

Just judging this novel based on the concept of "fanfiction", the author's writing style is among the best among all the fans I have read. The judgment of writing style involves many factors rather than words like some female videos. The understanding of the original work, the narrative ability, the control of the story, the development of the world view, etc. Are among the stronger ones in the ranks of fanciers. This "stronger" is my objective evaluation. If it is subjective, this is a qualified fanfic in my mind. Even if it is discussed objectively, it belongs to the category of excellent works. The last time I felt this way was when I watched "Dragon: Restarting Life". Compared with the original work, this book has a really high status in my heart. In short, I love reading it, and I plan to include it as one of my masterpieces. Of course, this review contains a lot of subjective factors, so it can be treated as a piece of music. If you don't like it, just read a few chapters and leave. The only drawback is that there may be problems with grammatical typos, but after all, everything is not perfect. This flaw is just like the original God before the Xumi version, and it is the kind of positive feedback that outweighs the negative feedback. All in all, book lovers who like fan fiction can give this book a try. In my opinion, it is only a matter of time before this book gets a score of 9.5, And it may even have a chance to enter the realm of excellent works with a score of 9.5. Taking back some of the above statements, this is no longer about entering the realm of masterpieces in 9.5, But about challenging the realm of gods in 9.7...

There are no big problems except that the update is slow. It can be regarded as top-grade. The author is very self-aware of himself, so he writes very carefully. There aren't many emotional scenes, but at least they aren't explosive. What follows are some tips. 1. The male protagonist's hang-ups include the demon part, his own body part, and the swordsmanship part. Demon - probably will be evolved in the future, but if possible, whether it is to be a grandfather, make friends, or something that can be used to cheat, it is quite said. It can also increase the coolness. 2. It's a matter of character. Writing novels is about selling character, and writing about character is about having a good story. You can try to learn how to quickly create a character. After reading the whole book, I basically didn't have a deep impression. However, Shuiyou's sentence "I am just like Qin" made a deep impression on me. 4. The problem of depression is that I have always felt that the protagonists of current online novels are those who suffer small losses and avenge big ones. But the plot of the protagonist being so-called manipulated... Is a bit uncomfortable. I just hope that I can fight back later. And I definitely can't be the Holy Mother. Just leave your forgiveness to God. I am only responsible for sending you to see God. 4. Come on, author

As a very small fan of Witch Journey, it is already very good. The writing is smooth throughout, the logic is self-consistent, and the character image of the Witch is well restored, without any poisonous points. However, because the male protagonist is a naughty person, this book is not so much a story about a female protagonist as a story about a single male protagonist (manual dog head). Therefore, this book actually focuses more on Irena. The changes in the male protagonist are very subtle, or there is no particularly intuitive feeling. And because of the character of the male protagonist, this book is destined to be a slow-burn novel, so those who like fast food literature can just quit.

Perfect fan work. Whether it is the expansion of the world view or the restoration and understanding of the original characters and plots, there is no violation at all. It almost perfectly intersperses the character of the protagonist and adds a fitting world view. The character of the male protagonist is also very good, full and full of personality. Moreover, the encounter with Irena is also very smooth, with no sense of violation at all. While maintaining her original character, the development of the plot is also extremely natural and reasonable. The author is really suitable for some fanfics! Mouth melon! It has become a state where I will die if I don't read novels! 😭

I still like this book very much. After reading this book, I am ready to read the original work (I don't like the second dimension). The protagonists of this book are the original male protagonists Qin and Irena. There are many original works in the book (no magic modifications), and many of the original works are for the plot. The plot of the book is not procrastinating, the writing is also very good, and the narrative method is novel (perhaps this is the case in the original work). The characters in the book are very individual. In my personal opinion, the author is better at psychological description. The main theme of the whole book is relaxed and cheerful (roughly that is what it means). There are many jokes in it, and the author also plays some jokes. When writing about the love affair between the male and female protagonists, it is also natural and harmonious (not given for free), logical, and has a lot of details and foreshadowing. Anyway, it is well written. Of course, I hope you can read it patiently. Some things in the book seem to be flaws, but in fact there are explanations later. Moreover, no one is a saint, how can he be without fault? Some small mistakes are actually normal, and there is no need to make such fine deductions. In addition, this is actually only the author's second book, so the requirements do not need to be so high. Reading novels is just for fun, but if you study them as knowledge, you will lose (personal opinion). I really like this book, and I hope it becomes popular (because I am just a student, and I am short of money, so I can't give any substantial support). Finally, I wish the author a Happy New Year!

A masterpiece. When reading this book, I feel like I felt when I read "The Witch's Journey". It makes people calm down and fully immerse themselves in the story. The rhythm of the narrative is particularly comfortable [Blow kiss] [Like]

It's okay, the writing is good, the plot design is a bit immature, and it's a bland and slow-burning type. The Witch's Journey is a combination of many short stories. The nature of fairy tales and fables is indeed very novel, but the connection of the main lines is still not obvious and prominent enough. In addition, the length of various places and countries is different, so it is a bit light and scattered. Maybe it would be better to add more obscure foreshadowing and foreshadowing to the short stories. The emotional line is still on the weak side, Irena goes from realizing her feelings to expressing her feelings a bit quickly, and although the male protagonist is dull, there is almost no description of his interactions and reactions to Irena's offensive. Even if it is about making a lot of contrasting efforts because the male protagonist does not understand love, it is much better. After all, two-way love is meaningful and sweeter. Hope to keep up the good work.

To be honest, this is one of the few books that Tomato wants to update. I personally like this type of book. It is probably the kind where the male protagonist is emotionally flawed and the female protagonist is disdainful. The most important thing is that the female protagonist has more scenes. It really suits my taste perfectly. This is my first book review on Tomato. By the way, book friends, can you recommend more books of this type? Other platforms are also welcome [Love]

There is no book that makes me burst into tears halfway through reading it. Maybe it's because of Irena. The smooth and smooth writing shocked me. This is the first time I have commented on a book like this. When you put yourself into the perspective of the protagonist, you will find that it is really well written. Whether it is the integration with the anime story or the story the author arranged for the protagonist, they are all very well written. Those who have never watched anime or those who have seen anime can easily bring their own emotions into watching it👀. To be honest, Tomato rarely has such excellent fan fiction. I support the author. Finish spreading flowers, the journey of life has no end, I wish you all can find your own flowers on the other side!

I've only read Chapter 125 so far This fanfic is really a surprise. I don't seem to have seen much of Irena's novels in this software. The quality of this book is really high. For me, a person who has only watched anime, I can understand this book (the order of the author's writing is different from the order of the animation) I think the most important thing about Irena is her crumbs. After all, we all call her the "Witch of crumbs." The author did not fail to write about this aspect, which is simply great. The portrayal of her love for money is also vividly reflected in the article. We all know that Irena started traveling because she was interested in the book "The Adventures of Nico" (the original plot seemed to be made up by her mother, I remember her mother was a very powerful witch). The author put the hero's previous story in this book, which is definitely a foreshadowing. Rating: five stars Let me complain, why is the male protagonist's name Qin?