Unemployed, I Had No Choice but to Become an Adventurer

A good western fantasy, the writing is smooth and not draggy. Did the author borrow some settings from Legend of Jianfeng? Some places are quite similar. I feel that there are points that can be improved, but there are two obvious areas. First, since the current main line is to collect the body of the heroine, it seems that we can throw out some clues appropriately under the premise that the heroine has some special origins. After all, the first body part has been obtained, but the identity of the heroine is almost unclear. Second, I feel that the portrayal and handling of conflicts are a bit uniform and thin. Whether it is the initial adventurer, Claude, or the three students in the academy chapter, these people's initial rejection of the protagonist is not only homogeneous, but also somewhat fragmented (although Claude's subsequent description is good). This personally does not think it is a big problem, but at least it affects the perception after watching too much. Overall, it's a good Western fantasy. Comments are personal opinions. If there are any shortcomings, you are welcome to criticize and correct me. I feel like giving four stars is a bit harsh, so I'll give it five stars [please give me more updates]

How shameless Retired from being a mercenary and jumped into the big hole of adventurers. There is no end to the part-time job~ (laughs) The money owed to the rich Brahtihi was increasing, so he had no choice but to negotiate a big deal worth hundreds of millions to repay~

In fact, the author Loren's character is already very good now and there is no need to change it. Those who say he is too cowardly are kids who don't know anything and are antisocial every day.

Except for the beginning, which is a bit old and weak, and the stitching of the Japanese routine is a bit discouraging, the writing is okay and the future is promising. The heroine is actually not that empty, and it is indeed in line with the heroine's fun and devilish setting.

The portrayal of Bruce is not very good. Although from his perspective, there is a little bit of sarcasm, but after all, he has been working for 20 years, so he can't even see this.

Buhao, after raising him for a while, he came back and found that the sky had fallen [crying][crying][crying] If you don't redeem it, it seems like you have raised it [cry][cry][cry]

Similar to Niku, the combat power is a little confusing, but the writing is okay. Although it is not very good, it is not too poisonous. The plot development is still relatively slow, not quite like a cool novel, but there are also exciting descriptions of battles and daily life between the male and female protagonists. If you are short of books, you can read it to pass the time [Thoughts]

Great, I found another good book. I especially like this kind of road novel about the interaction between the male and female protagonists, especially the heroine's protectiveness. Love means possession and eating alone. If Rotich could allow Loren to have a harem, then Rotich would no longer be Rotich.

It looks good, but the update time is uncertain and I don't know if it will be finished. It is a daily-to-another world story with some ups and downs. The male and female protagonists are very sweet. Although it has not been officially confirmed, they are a couple by default. The male and female protagonists are both very strong, and the male protagonist has just awakened. The protagonist has a good outlook on life, but the supporting role is [laughing]

It's more to my taste. After I'm tired of those cliche plots, reading this book is like heaven. The novel overall leans towards the Japanese light novel style of another world, but there is a little bit of light, but it doesn't affect it. All in all, it's a great read, no need to say more. [Attention] [Blow a kiss] (I have to take tens of millions of supplements to stop the update! [Cry])

A very good style, connected by wonderful event units, with relaxed transitions between events, and the rhythm is well controlled. The battle is still almost boring, but compared to the same period as Tomato, it is very good, at least it is not procrastinating or embarrassing.

Is the author a single female protagonist? It must be

I think it looks pretty good, but I don't know why it doesn't get a high score. It feels better than many 9 o'clock ones.

It's really beautiful, but I don't know why there are so few people. The devil girl has a very cute personality!

A very standard Western fantasy novel with a smooth story. My rating is 4 stars. However, the author's language reminded me of the first time I read a Western fantasy novel, so I will add one more star.

Not bad, I like it very much

Won the Easter match

It looks good, and there's nothing poisonous about it.

The writing is also great.

My pastor's wife is actually the devil?

Why hasn't the author updated it? This is one of the better books I found on Tomato.

It's quite interesting, I hope it has a single female protagonist.

I really like this style of novel, it's very interesting, but why hasn't the author updated it yet [angry]

Followers of the God of Misfortune and followers of the God of Knowledge form the God of Disaster [I understand]

Author, you must win the resurrection! ! It's nice to look at, but the author is prone to fraud [angry] suddenly resurrects, shocking you [smile] [smile] [smile]

I've only read a few chapters, but it's still very good, and I have the desire to continue reading.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking. I like it when the male and female protagonists team up to live together, and they go on adventures together and sprinkle dog food from time to time [eating melon]

It would be better if the interaction between the male and female protagonists is sweeter. Also, the author please don't talk about life span, otherwise he will be killed [smile]

It's very beautiful and the heroine is very mysterious. More humorous…

I have read Chapter 45, and I feel pretty good so far. I have the desire to read on. Good luck, author.