My Teacher, Kashiwagi Eri

Let me state in advance that the first 40 chapters are basically depressing. The protagonist is trapped in life and is often misunderstood by others and has to apologize. The inner drama is rich but he has a tendency to feel inferior. There is a similar poisonous point, ()For example, I apologized to the service department three times, which was very flattering, and it was very uncomfortable to read cool articles.) Similar to the feeling of grassroots rise, the writing is still good Things are getting better and better from now on. After the novel was successfully published, life became better and better. It is a dull type of novel. Personal complaint (the author always says that the data is not good, but I think it is because the number of photos suppressed in the early stage is too many, almost 50, and most readers are suppressed before they want to promote) Maybe it's because I've been too busy recently and I'm tired of reading cool novels. This novel is also being updated.

According to the evaluation, it is edible. If you want to find a comprehensive comic to pass the time and can accept the flavor of Nikkei, you can give this a try Let's talk about the advantages first. The author is good at writing, and the emotional descriptions are relatively delicate. The middle part of the writing gives people a sense of youth, which reminds me of when I used to watch campus animations. However, let's talk about shortcomings and character creation. The protagonist is a very typical Asashi Japanese light novel-style male protagonist. He is gentle and capable, but he is very, very naughty. If this is original, it can be said to be the only way to grow up, but this is fan fiction. And the most important thing is that this book never gives a main direction, whether it is career, love, or the main line of the original work. This book doesn't talk about this. After reading more than 270 chapters, the timeline is only 3 months? My relationship was basically at a stable level, and my career was just an introduction. I thought I would be able to take off immediately after revealing my identity, but there was no follow-up. There is even reincarnation at the end, and the content of the upper-level narrative is disgusting. If you ask me, it is a plot foreshadowing. Man, this is a fanfic. Readers are either here to see love, but they are here to see fun, or pretending to be a slap in the face, and in the end you can't get into it [face covering] We are talking about the emotional line, the heroine Yinglili, but the emotional line is extremely awkward. To put it nicely, it means respecting the original characters, but to say it worse, it is awkward. Normal fans write about the key point. After the protagonist declares victory, even if the heroine is sick and takes a step back, the protagonist will hit the ball straight and go straight to the A. But this book, Asasi, respect it, will you die if you just go up to it... In conclusion, this book has about 50 to 150 chapters, which is good. It can reach the level of the rankings, but overall it will be criticized and discontinued. 🍅 Is a place where you can pass the time. Without changing your style, you still have to pursue your own growth theory and foreshadowing theory. In the end, few people will follow it. As of 9:30 am on February 20, it has been 10 hours since the last update. There are 41 people pressing the update button. It is very tragic, especially now that it is a holiday. This book has 700 reviews and a score of 7.6. There is a reason why the score is not high, especially under the 🍅 scoring mechanism. I gave it five points to comfort the author, who feels that he is somewhat depressed. But I still have to say, if this wasn't 🍅, I wouldn't be so Asasi

Yes, the author's descriptions of emotions are relatively delicate, and the emotional lines between the characters are quite light. It is a good fanfic, but when I saw that it was a single female protagonist, I still chose to abandon it because I personally prefer the harem, because when the author described the female characters in the previous chapters, he more or less described his love for the male protagonist, and I didn't like this regretful ending, so I abandoned it, but for readers who like single female protagonists, this book is still worth reading.

The writing and emotional descriptions are good. But I read light novels to escape reality, not for you to stuff into my mind a bunch of relationships that are as bad as reality. Please write a lighthearted thank you for light novels. If the author could write a light novel in the style of Angel Next Door, the rating would be higher. Also, I personally think that An Yilun is also a pure child. Every time I think of Yinglili giving her first kiss to that guy in elementary school, it feels really uncomfortable. I suggest the author pay attention to it. Maybe I am too emotionally obsessed (laughs) In short, despite its shortcomings, the work is worth reading. It's just that reading "Relationships" really makes people feel depressed. Maybe it's my personal problem. It's still a three-star rating. I can't sympathize with this book. I personally feel that my chest feels tight when I look at the protagonist's daily life, and I feel overwhelmed by interpersonal relationships.

Very, very, very beautiful. The arrogant party wins and the pure love party wins! To put it simply, this book is like a tsundere, who refuses in the early stage but welcomes her in return, and reacts interestingly in the later stage, which directly leads to the end [note] [full]

It's quite good-looking, with a sense of immersion, the plot is natural and smooth, and the characters are not too OOC. Some of them are quite charming, such as Jing Keai and Ying Lili. But some of the writing is exaggerated. For example, Yukino is always written in cold and icy terms. Even now, she is always cold on the outside, occasionally warm on the inside, but she is just a breathy insect [laughs]. Some of the depression in the previous part is also caused by the character of the protagonist. The author did not deliberately suppress it, so it's okay. Personally, I don't like the type of protagonist who is sensitive, has low self-esteem and lacks love, and becomes Xiao Chunan when he meets a girl. There is also an illusion behind it that she likes me, to suppress emotions and pull feelings away. Then I also like the part about the second grade, that is, in Xiao Lonely, I make the second grade remarks to intensify conflicts and create negative effects. Write less and write less. It is unnecessary. Also, Haji Feng has been suppressed for so long. The first emotional scene involves Ying Lili, which is not satisfying. I personally hope that Hui will jump in the queue as soon as possible, or something else. In the former, you also laid a foreshadowing of Taeyang or something, and the others are still just friendships.

This is the first time I have read a book seriously and devotedly. Whether it is the protagonist Haji Fong's mutual redemption among friends or the love story line between ordinary life and Yinglili, the redemption of two people who have broken each other is very easy to get into. And Hajifeng, please don't stop updating! ₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧̢ ₎₎

I didn't feel funny or relaxed. I only saw one protagonist because the system made everything very messy and messy. It was really depressing to watch. Maybe it's because I brought myself into the role of the protagonist. After looking at the back, Hajifeng is indeed getting better. I hope the author can continue writing in this state, and I also wish Hajifeng will get better and better.

Ah, I miss it so much. The more I read it, the more I feel. This is not a cookie-cutter harem novel, nor is it a boring mindless novel. I only see the sincerity and flesh-and-blood characters in it. It is very real. The protagonist is like the epitome of every lonely person. I see myself. It is a perfect redemption. They are all saving each other and they themselves may be saving me who is reading the book...

The author's sincerity is reflected in the writing, and the protagonist's inner questions resonate deeply with an ordinary young man like me. Thank you, author, for not just writing words... You have selflessly shared this understanding and feeling of "emotion" with us. This emotion is sincere and warm, fulfilling and unforgettable. I hope the author can get rid of the world in which he wrote and find peace in reality. Take care of yourself, everyone. May we all meet friends, make partners, laugh sincerely, and perform our "youth story"