About Me Dating Elaina in Tokyo

It's very interesting. After all, there are very few witch journey novels in the entire Tomato and even the entire Internet series, and the ones with extremely high quality are basically rare. However, the author gave me hope and I feel that the writing is very good.

The novel subject matter, the double-person switching and the writing style are very good. Also, the author is Huang Huang, I also like it [shy] Damn bastard, you write so well, you must reward me [laughing evilly]

It doesn't matter whether the book is written or not. The key is to watch the author dance in Qinghai.

Sweet, sweet, sweet, so sweet. This is definitely the sweetest novel I have ever read, and the narrative writing is very good. At the same time, the dual-perspective experience also allowed me to get more involved. I hope the author will never give up. This book is really good.

The author, please give it a try. It's not easy to see such a healthy Irena fan on Tomato. I'm asking if there will be more updates. Woohoo.

The author's writing style is really good (٩•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ! The details are also very vivid, and the person change is just right, which really makes it feel like a Japanese girl (I am really touched to see such a well-written person change!)! The author's article really has the feeling of "a tree with thousands of branches in the spring breeze, tender as gold and soft as silk" (especially the infinite emotions contained in the subtle details. Although it is not directly pointed out, there is a feeling of "silence is better than sound at this time", which feels much better than articles that directly and deliberately emphasize emotional experience)! The plot content close to daily life and the psychological fluctuations of the characters also give readers a strong sense of immersion, making it very comfortable to read. It is also very consistent with the characters in the original work. There is basically no sense of dissonance when reading. Combined with the background of the story that is close to the original author, it gives people a feeling of reading a story written by Mr. Shiraishi. It is truly top-notch among the Magic Travel fan fiction! Unconsciously, I seemed to have said a bit too much. . . (I'm sorry ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ), I was so moved...) Finally, I hope the author can keep writing, and I will always support the author! [Top post][top post][top post] Speaking of which, I remember that the author seems to be still a student. I also wish the author success in his studies and a title on the gold list! I hope you will have wings and become a northern sea fish [Ding Tie] [Ding Tie] [Ding Tie]! I wrote this review in a hurry because of my feelings. The article is not very elegant and the content is a bit lengthy. I apologize deeply and hope the author will be generous! (⋟⋞) ——Readers who always support you!

I think this novel really stood out to me. First of all, the change of person's person is very similar to that of a light novel. Secondly, I paid attention to some details. There are many, many advantages. Of course, it's so sweet~~

Judging from my current progress, this book is mainly described from a third perspective. The description from the third perspective is good, but it is not suitable for this kind of love story. I personally feel that bringing the first perspective into the third perspective is not conducive to the expression of this emotion. Although the author also reflected some of his emotions through this kind of detailed description, I think it is still not enough. My evaluation of this book is generally not like reading a novel, but like reading an essay. The author's writing has a feeling of mist in the clouds and is not very purposeful. Therefore, the suggestions I give here hope that the author can learn more about the main factors of the novel and read more high-quality novels of the same type. The background is not the most important thing, the main thing is the characters. I believe the author should have been exposed to this, but the author's main writing is some description of appearance or environment, and most of them are language descriptions. For people like you who like language descriptions, you should mark which sentence was said by which person? It's easy to get confused. The main purpose of the novel is to shape the character's personality. It's the key to a good novel.

I've watched 1/3 of it so far. There is no poisonous point, the plot is very sweet, and Irena is very cute. It's just that the male and female protagonists confirmed their relationship too quickly. I have read too many books and seen many authors complaining. Many readers urged them to confess their feelings quickly, but in fact, after the confession confirmed the relationship, the number of readers dropped by half. It seems that within 40 chapters of this book, it was clear that they had a crush on each other.

I don't know why, but this first-person writing style looks like a memoir, and a little sad [crying]