Magical Journey: Companions

The writing style is very good, and the plot design is also perfect. It has the slow-paced feel of the original work (in my opinion). All in all, after Hibiscus Flower, there is a good-looking Demon Travel fanfic.

The protagonist has a lovable personality, high emotional intelligence, excellent interpersonal distance control, is considerate and likes to play pranks, and has a high interest in various events. At present, the past is mysterious and exciting, the appearance period is early enough, and the timing of each appearance is appropriate. There is no obvious tendency to love the Witch, but they have a high affection for each other, and the dialogue fits the character and is not OC. The narrative logic is clear, the pace of the plot is slow, and the daily life is relatively relaxed and enjoyable (this is how the Demon Travel fandom is ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧; the emotions are light but sincere, the original story line is naturally connected with the main line, the plot is ups and downs, the original characters have distinctive and interesting personalities, the background is complete, and the portrayal is even more vivid and impressive than the accompanying characters in the main line. The description is not detailed, but it is vivid enough and appropriately detailed; the foreshadowing of the book is not dense at present, but the key blank spaces and hints are never absent; the changes in the main line are not small, but they are very clever and do not violate the harmony, but make the characters more full. It's a very good book. The current score is 7.1, Which I personally think is on the low side.

After reading a few chapters, I felt it was okay. If you keep up your writing style, maybe you can touch the flower of the other side

Some people say that the first few pictures are a bit discouraging? I'm not sure, but I feel it's not a big problem. My suggestion based on my current impression is, just read it. The more you read, the more addictive it becomes. It's an absolute masterpiece. If it weren't for the word count and update speed, the review might be better than Higanbana (one chapter a day is really not enough, but reading it once a week is good)

Beautiful, love watching. Although I haven't read the original work, it made me fall in love with both Irena and Idio. As for the rest, the emotional descriptions are very delicate, so I won't go into details.

Nice book. The relationship progressed a little quickly in the early stage, and then there were chance encounters and ordinary travel. I slightly adapted the original story and created my own story, which was okay. The male protagonist and Irena have a good fight and mutually destructive interaction.

Yes, this is another book that you can read after the Flowers of the Other Side.

The plot is novel, and the male protagonist's character is quite interesting. For a female protagonist who "will never find a boyfriend even if she wants to die", the overall progress is not too slow. I just want to watch the ambiguous period before falling in love:) The only drawback is that the updates are too slow. The author gives me 100 million updates a day [Adoration] [Adoration]

This book is really great among the second creations of the Demon Brigade. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are reasonable, and the character creation is gradually three-dimensional. The character creation in the early stage is poor. It doesn't affect my reading if I haven't read the original work. I only read a small part of the original work, but it doesn't affect my reading of this book. I personally feel that the reason why the book is not popular is because this book had some poisonous points in the early stage. I forgot the specific details, but not much. I was persuaded to quit the book at the time, but then I happened to read it when I ran out of books to read. I continued to read it and found that it was quite good despite the few poisonous points. This was the first problem that persuaded me to quit the book in the early stage (it could be that I was too picky). The second reason was that the title of the book was not attractive and the theme of the Demon Journey was relatively unpopular, so there were few people reading it. Overall, I recommend watching it, even if you haven't seen the original work. Author, please update me honestly. If you don't update, what will I eat? ´ᯅ`

It's not bad. Except for the emotional progress at the beginning, which is a bit fast, it's quite comfortable later on. After reading Lao Qin, this is the second book on the same theme that I'm interested in [laughing] I hope the author will keep updating.