
There's Something Seriously Wrong with This Hufflepuff
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- Ongoing
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- 461k Words
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- Unknown
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- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Fanqie
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OMG!!! I Found an HP Fic That Blows All the Others Away!
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Male-Oriented Hogwarts Fanfiction (Don't Ask Why It's Not Harry)
Stuff some fanfiction in here for me. I want to feel fulfilled. No, I want everyone to feel fulfilled.
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I'm looking for stories about Harry Potter. Are there any authors on Tomato Novel who write them?
Looking for Harry Potter Fics with an Original Female Lead Who Was Tom Riddle’s Childhood Friend
The female lead can be a Hufflepuff or a Slytherin, preferably a beautiful one. Childhood friends, and the worldbuilding and characterization should stay true to the originals. The male lead's characterization can fall apart a bit later on, but I really love the childhood-friends setup with the female lead and Tom Riddle.
Looking for Harry Potter Fan Fiction, Otome-Oriented, With a Female Lead Who Is Loved by Everyone
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Any Harry Potter Reader-Inserts? Please, I’m Begging You (>_<)
Harry Potter Fanfiction Involving Malfoy, with a Proud Pure-Blood Heroine
I don’t want anything that goes against Draco Malfoy’s character. He should have that arrogant, pure-blood aristocratic air. No stories where someone transmigrates into his body and becomes best friends with Muggles, or opposes the pure-blood ideology while still enjoying all the privileges that come with being a pure-blood aristocrat. I really hate that kind of thing. The male and female leads should be well matched in status. Please!
Little Snape Stays Away from the Main Character
Looking for books similar to "HP: Severus Is Working Hard Today Too." Harry Potter fan fiction centered on Snape.
Harry Potter Female-Lead Fics, Preferably Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff, but Not Slytherin
Harry Potter Fan Fiction, Any Characters Welcome
Looking for books similar to Harry Potter: Minister Malfoy's Love Journal. Please recommend Harry Potter fanfiction pairing different characters together. The more variety, the better.
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Looking for a Novel About Becoming the Dark Lord's Undead at Hogwarts, Creating Original Magic, and Playing the Pig to Eat the Tiger
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Very nice! ! I have read a CP between Cedric and Draco before. This one seems to be a CP between Cedric and Draco. Hahahahahahahahahahahaha (I will bet on this pair first [laughs]
My favorite so far is the part where the protagonist and Myrtle team up to catch Luna's bully. Whether in novels or movies, Myrtle is a somewhat crazy ghost who cries shrilly at the top of her voice. It seems that she is not very likable even if she becomes a ghost. I'm glad to see this kind of thing in the fanfic. Why did Myrtle become a ghost? Because of obsession. But which obsession? I don't think it was an inexplicable death. She was much calmer when talking about the death process. What Myrtle is obsessed with is being bullied, the inexplicable malice from others, and the resentment towards herself when she cannot resist. If the heroine and the others can really quell this obsession, maybe Myrtle's ghost can disappear, allowing her to truly find peace after her death 50 years ago, and allowing the 50-year-old bathroom in Hogwarts to truly be quiet. As for not giving full marks, firstly, the scenes where the heroine gets along with her family really made me uncomfortable and made me feel tired after watching it, although it's not a good idea to say this from a God's perspective. Second, the emotional line with Cedric was a bit rough. In fact, when it came to the confession part, I was still a little confused. Because there were really very few descriptions of the heroine's throbbing affection for Cedric before, Cedric's feelings for the heroine are relatively straightforward, but they are often diluted by the plot. Speaking of the sweetest ones, I personally like the part where the heroine goes to Seid's house to spend Christmas, and the part where she dreams about pastries at the beginning of the first grade.
A very novel design, from Lips Malfoy, Miss Malfoy of Hufflepuff who loves to cook. The plot is novel and logically coherent. For example, the plot of Fudge stepping down and Arthur Weasley being elected minister is very unique and novel. The overall story is very well written and the characters are well portrayed, but the timeline of some details is a little confusing. The final heroine CP is Cedric.
It is undoubtedly a good article, with an unconventional plot, excellent characters, witty and smooth writing, and a relaxed atmosphere. It is not only suitable for leisure reading, but it is also rare that the author, like JK Rowling, can naturally integrate some of the problems he has seen in the real world into the novel. It is just right and thought-provoking without being offensive. This undoubtedly enhances the dimension of the book. My general criterion for distinguishing good books from junk literature is very simple, that is, if I can read it again and again, it is good; if I can't stand it, have to jump to read it, get more and more angry as I read it, and forget it after reading it, it is definitely rubbish. As for this novel, I recommend book friends to collect it. They may want to read it again in the future. As long as the characters and plot don't collapse, as long as it can be completed without any pitfalls. It's not over yet, I hope the plot will be more exciting in the future. Although there are occasionally some people who disagree with the innocent thoughts of the little girl Hermione, but that is just my personal opinion. As far as Hermione's character is concerned, it is appropriate for her to think that way, and it does not affect my actual evaluation of this book: excellent and recommended. [Like] Read and cherish it. In the vast sea of books, it is not easy to come across a good book with good intentions, good writing and three correct views.
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The book is good and the article is interesting. But why was Veritaserum not used during the trial of Peter Pettigrew? It took a long time to write it. If truth serum was used, wouldn't it be possible to have a quick trial?
It's good to watch🫶, I like the heroine design, the plot doesn't follow the original work at all, I like all the original and innovative parts
Nice! I especially like the heroine turning her brother into a rabbit. This idea is really interesting.
I've wanted to read this type of article for a long time, but I didn't expect it to exist. I love it.
I think it's really good to watch. I don't know why not many people watch it. The character creation is very successful. I like it very much.