Hogwarts: Maxing Out My Proficiency to Become the Strongest

The protagonist has a good idea at the beginning, but what about the plot? To use a sentence I told Guo Degang in the article: "I am very smooth, brother, it is really very smooth"🍉 I can't remember whether the original book describes it, but in the movie, the Twins used Apparition to wander around Sirius's old house at No. 12 Grimmauld Place, and were sprayed by Mrs. Weasley. So they should have learned it in the time period after Goblet of Fire, and they should be old enough. As it turned out, the plot of the book was that the protagonist, Gemini and others went to school on Christmas Day in the first grade because they helped Gemini with a small favor that could not be mentioned. Mr. Weasley taught me, and Mrs. Weasley didn't object. I can only say that it was too smooth, and I got whatever I wanted. Mrs. Molly's character was ruined. In fact, if a first-year genius wants to learn the Patronus Charm, Minor Hexes, Armor Protection, Advanced Transfiguration and other magic that can only be learned by senior students, Mr. Weasley knows it and will probably teach it, and Mrs. Molly will most likely not object, but learn to Disapparate? Somewhat exaggerated🤦

Everyday prose, but well written. The AI ​​flavor is not very strong, unlike some plots that are enjoyable to watch. The descriptions are messy, the setting is far from the original work, and is always distracted by other things. I hope the protagonist can concentrate on studying, and it is better not to participate in the main plot. It is also not like some novels. If you study hard, you will be noticed by the old bee inexplicably. Keep writing, except that the amount is a bit small, it is good, and you should focus on the improvement of the protagonist.

Has anyone read it? Leave a comment. Don't make it look like a stand-alone version. I accept both the good and the bad. I will change it immediately if I can. Is the writing too poor? Why is the reading rate so low? The reading rate is quite high. Is it because I don't read most of the content and only read those who are interested?

Everyday life, a bit bland, vulgar and unsophisticated

It feels good and looks comfortable. There is no comparative introduction to the levels, so I killed two third-level wizards with a gun in Knockturn Alley, and I can barely refer to them as ordinary adult wizards. It is recommended to add something. When I went back and took a look, it didn't seem to say it was level 3. There was no reference at all, so the level is meaningless.

Come on, the beginning is perfect

It's a good magic book, let's see what happens next.

Cowhide Arthur and Jasmine teach the first grade protagonist how to apparate.

It's quite interesting. It's not like the cookie-cutter Harry Potter beginning, which is plot-driven.

Well written and worth reading