A Talisman Master’s Life, Beginning as a Nobody

New book is opening a pit, please give me more advice

Very well written, especially the last few chapters. Author, where do you live? Let's get together when we have time, haha😃

It's so beautiful, but I'm really too lazy to comment 😶

Very good, the setting is very good, but the fighting scenes are a bit bland and can be improved. In addition, the protagonist now lacks a motivational goal. Anyway, no villain can defeat Fu Zun, so the protagonist's sense of urgency is not that strong, so the main line feels not clear enough. Overall, I appreciate this theme very much: using science to explain the Tao of Talisman, in the future it can be the entire path of cultivating immortals. It is foreseeable that the protagonist will develop unique Fu Dao technology in the future. (Why do runes have to be drawn on small pieces of paper? Can't they be drawn on metal to make an engine?) One thing that seems very strange now is that I press the accelerator button on the novel from time to time, and from time to time I abbreviate a paragraph and then continue writing. It seems very uncomfortable. It just breaks the sense of the picture abruptly. Moreover, this book has too few climaxes. I couldn't light it up after reading it for a long time. Poor rhythm control

A very wonderful book with a very unique idea. The protagonist uses mathematics, physics and chemistry to realize his own power and reflect his own value. There are many women, but no heroine? That's probably it. There is no Madonna in the whole book, which is great! Also, when you read a book, read it carefully. It is recommended not to read the comments. The comments will affect your reading mood. It is fate to meet the author's book in the group of books. If you like it, read it. If you don't like it, just quit it silently. Don't complain in the comment area. It will have a bad influence. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to you for bringing joy to my ordinary life [send heart][send heart][send heart]

I have only read the first part so far. Overall, it is pretty good. I would like to give it five stars for encouragement. Let me talk about my feelings about reading this book: Maybe it is because the author is not very good at writing emotions, so it is difficult for me to get into it. Then it makes me feel that I am just reading a book, instead of immersing myself in the world and experiencing the experience of the protagonist in the book.

Chapter 71: Damn it, it's a knife. Chapter Seventy-Two: Damn it, he's resurrected, he draws his sword and looks around at a loss.

The author hasn't updated for several days. Please give me a response, at least don't make me wait meaninglessly!

I don't know why you think Bai Xue is bad, I think this girl is cool, It's not harmful to control. Moreover, it's just a guess, and there is no confirmation. The original text also states that Bai Xue realized something was wrong with her, nor did she find that she was being controlled. After all, she was fine when chatting with the protagonist. No one could have imagined this. @Author, I want to ask one thing, will Bai Xue turn back into a little lolita?

Overall, it's good, but I have a small suggestion that I hope the author can see. When describing a woman's appearance, can the author use an objective third-perspective external description instead of a subjective description from the protagonist's perspective?