Hogwarts: The Fire God Blazes a Trail

I finished the real review xdm in one go. It is very well written. There is no meaningless repetition of the original plot. There are many subtle changes and breakthroughs in the general direction. For example, the blessing of the Egyptian sun god counts as one line, and the Lion King counts as one line. These are rare settings. It's not an invincible novel. His growth rate is so fast compared to his peers. But compared to the level of danger in the magic world, it can only be said that he lacks firepower (I have a phobia of lack of firepower). The character traits of the original characters have also been deepened, such as the evaluation of the Malfoy family as "bad but timid, so not completely bad (the original work highlights the bond between family members and the ability to adapt to the situation)", and added some plots of professors, and even Professor Binns. Although I only went to ask questions and write a note, it was the first time I met him. There are some welcome changes, such as Hermione no longer likes Lockhart, Ron is no longer a dark cricket (of course, he is still incompetent), etc., And some original flavors are retained, such as the old bat is still spraying venom and attacking Harry, but after seeing Lockhart, the teacher I like that Min will give pointers after her talent for potions (the gold content of making polyjuice potion in second grade) (first mocking and then giving pointers is consistent with the character). I also like that second grade He no longer pursues perfect scores and focuses on transformation and potions. After all, he is indeed talented and omnipotent, but somewhat incompetent. Let me talk about what everyone likes. The protagonist likes fighting. He elbowed Malfoy in front of Snape many times and once in the first grade. He faced the terrifying Garlic Man and killed him. In the second grade, he bravely braved the Forbidden Forest and fought. There are also classic quotations that have been rewritten one after another. As for the emotional description, the single heroine is in pure love, and is still in a reserved and ambiguous period. She doesn't drive, there is no whispering, but there is normal physical contact to warm up the relationship. Needless to say, He Zai looked at the magic mirror and saw the gold content of the wedding. All in all, Love Line is a book that I feel very comfortable reading. Regarding some of the added magic, I like the fireworks and butterflies very much. They are powerful, elegant, and have many uses. They can self-destruct a drone swarm, brothers. I feel like the continuous fireball has some of the same uses as the fireworks and butterflies, but I think it's not bad that the magic feature of continuous fire can be used in other magics. There are other magics that are well written, but I don't think it's good to finish it. Although it has already revealed a lot of people, it's all to attract everyone [laughs], and the plot is only in its second year, so there is still a long way to go. The author will give me a quick update!

It's beautiful. Why is the rating so low? I'm in Phuket? ? ? ? I think among so many HP fanfics, this one is the only one that I like the character of the protagonist, and the emotional scenes with Hermione are also very rich, and the plot is also very ups and downs, right? ? ?

The emotional scene with Hermione is okay, but it makes the protagonist a bit naughty. He must have been too hasty due to the influence of the comment section. The protagonist is in the third grade and is thirteen years old. Even in the original book and the movie, Harry and the others are still very immature at this time. The protagonists play together and have the faces of adults about 1.8 Meters tall. When the third grade participates in the duel competition, they will give you three moves. A classic routine. Although everyone knows that the protagonist is handsome, the adult witches next to him cannot take their eyes away as soon as he appears. Under normal circumstances, who would be obsessed with a 13-year-old boy? There is no need to deliberately describe the pale handsomeness. The main thing is to write the emotional scene with Hermione. It is the kind of childhood sweetheart love that others envy. Come on, the author is great ❤️

It's very interesting, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I have to support it. The plot is very exciting. The heroine Hermione is not a vase, and the sweetness is gradually increasing. The protagonist's growth process is sufficient and exciting. It is not invincible at the beginning, nor is it a boring novel like running around Harry and restoring the plot. It has the author's own new plot concept, which is very attractive. I finished it in two days. I look forward to more updates from the author. I strongly recommend updating three times a day [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [send heart] [send heart]

I like this book very much, and it does not worsen the character of individual characters in the original book. The male protagonist's character design is also okay. I also liked several high-scoring Harry Potter fanfics before, but most of them ended hastily. I hope the author of this one can stick to it. (At least it's the same as the original work. The male and female protagonists have a baby. I really want to see it.)

It's a very enjoyable story. I don't think it's too toxic, and the characters are pretty good. It doesn't deviate from the original work. After all, this book is a fanfic, and there will be some settings that belong to the author, so you don't need to take it too seriously.

Saw the update, it's ok. A rare description of a pure Gryffindor. Maybe the author is stacking attributes for the protagonist, and fighting is not fun enough. The leader of the lion pride is beginning to take shape. Look forward to it. The flames and the sun stand out. It is very difficult to be a leader in Gryffindor. Outstanding strength is only a small part of it. The best quality is the most important and the most difficult to express. I hope the Sorting Hat's "Your passion is setting me on fire" is well deserved.

The protagonist's growth is very smooth and does not feel too abrupt. It has been strengthened since picking up the blessing of the sun. Before it was strengthened, it was far behind Hermione in various aspects and was far ahead. So this may not be a good book. It does not have the strong feedback feeling of other good books, but the improvement every time is indeed not small. It is suitable for readers who like to develop. The emotional line between the protagonist and Hermione is also quite smooth. The warmth of daily life is quite comfortable.

This book is rated so low, I think it's one of the better ones in the Harry Potter genre. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, the speed of strength improvement is not slow, and the emotional line with Hermione is also well controlled. All in all, this book is worth reading. Also: The author should update it soon, these few chapters are simply not enough.

I don't know why it's only 7.5, At least 9. The writing, plot, and IQ are all top-notch. It's the best HP fan I've ever seen.