Hogwarts: My Magic Has Turned Dark!

It's rare to find a female protagonist with multiple HPs, and it has a relatively complete collection. Currently, the female protagonists are Hermione, Cho, Pansy, Daphne, and Penello, and there will probably be Ginny, Luna, and Astoria in the future.

It's good, interesting and logical, and the emotional scenes are also good. I just don't know when I will be able to eat meat. I hope there will be more female protagonists.

OK, next I will use the most upright, most straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most down-to-earth, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, most clean and neat, most honest and frank, most simple and simple, closest to daily life, least pretentious, and not piling up gorgeousness. The vocabulary does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout thoughts, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be sophisticated, and does not add unnecessary cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, and every sentence is sincere and true. The whole process is in plain language, without any subtlety or covering up. Every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple and unsophisticated. Hua's expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, and no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that it contains no empty words, so neat that there is no nonsense, so magnanimous that no reservations are hidden, and so popular that it is popular. Everyone can understand it regardless of age. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful, refreshing and direct without procrastination. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without foreshadowing. It tells the truth without covering up. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being flashy. It is clear and clear without being vague. If it is frank and candid without going around in circles, I will tell you: it's okay.

Writing style: No problem, it reads smoothly and there is no literary blemish. Content: comfortable to read, logical and self-consistent, and has its own characteristics Regarding the female protagonists, if you read them carefully, it is not difficult to find that each one is not liked for no reason. They have their own incidents and accumulation of good feelings. And one thing must be made clear. If a man is handsome enough and outstanding, girls will be more proactive than you think. In my opinion, the article is already very restrained and reserved, which is very consistent with Tiantian's slow love (of course, there are also reasons why she is too young to go further)

The writing is okay, the logic is normal, and it is not much worse than Bloodline, which is more special and has a reasonable plot and good rhythm. This author is a bit outrageous, probably: the smelly feet of beautiful women also smell good. This feeling. And did you see the plot in the comment section where he said that others should not question him? Most of the places are indeed correct, but the original description of some places is rather vague, or even the author himself remembered it wrong. Talking is like taking gunpowder, so it's not a big deal if others remember it wrong, right? And I think most readers are quite polite. (This is how high-quality Harry Potter fans are) I have a complete set of Harry Potter collector's editions, and the spine of the book spells out Hogwarts. I started reading it in junior high school. In junior high and high school, there were no electronic products to play with, so I just read books. I have read my favorite Harry Potter books nearly 10 times. Read through it at least 3 times. It has been 4 or 5 years now, and many things are not so clear anymore.

The author has previously written a Hogwarts fanfic with more than 500 chapters and a million words. He has already finished it and found this book again. The writing is really good. You can pursue it with confidence.

As of Chapter 90, the protagonist is neither a virgin nor completely black. The character design is very stable. The supporting characters are good and bad, but basically not OOC. The plot follows the original work, but there is no deliberate blindness in order to maintain the original plot. Highlights ① A semi-invincible character who is always strong enough without compromising his combat power. ②Do not deliberately belittle the original characters. Poison spot ①Lightning protection is slightly toxic, but there is no big problem Summary: 8 to 9 points, worth a look

The plot is good, but the author's handling of emotional lines is average. I recommend that you don't include too many female protagonists, just 3-4, because emotions need to be cultivated, and only through gradual improvement in interaction can you give the character a soul, and too many emotional scenes assigned to the female protagonist will be difficult to write. Every time I see multiple female protagonists in the harem, it is like a brainless stallion novel. , There is absolutely no emotional foundation for whomever you meet, and you will forget the first heroine later in order to write the role of the new heroine. In addition, the audience watches multiple heroines in order to promote the cruel main plot. You can add more daily love posts and interactive Shura fields to relax your mood, and also add rich plot content and reasonable content.

It's quite good, I still want to read it after finishing it. This is already great. In Tomato, most people just don't want to watch it anymore. Let's talk about some shortcomings! Although I am a Harry Potter fan, I have only watched a few episodes of the movie a long time ago. I feel that many of the character descriptions are not detailed enough and the characterization is not distinct enough. I can't picture the character in my mind, it's a bit fuzzy. The protagonist knows a lot but uses very few. Basically they become skill collections. Everything else is pretty good, at least I can watch it.

It's a good story with multiple female protagonists, but I'm curious about how to deal with it later, such as the dance, etc. If it's not written well, it will feel weird. Of course, it is the most interesting Hogwarts story with multiple female protagonists so far, but I feel that the updates are too slow. After one semester, there are only more than 130 chapters [Petrochemical]