Arknights: Kal'tsit’s Brother Is on the Run from Prison

It's very interesting. The protagonist's pure human supremacy is like a P agency war criminal [laughing]

It is a relatively good Ark fanfic. There is no poisonous point in the early and middle stages, and the characters are not OC. But in the later stage, when there are future people and mutated creatures, there is a feeling of forcibly increasing the difficulty. It is like deus ex machina, as if it is maliciously slowing down the progress, and the setting of the protagonist is clear. It seems that there are some patches. From the beginning of the artificial man to the later relationship with the devil, it is obvious that there is something wrong with the outline, but the plot direction is still acceptable. In fact, at the beginning, I thought that the protagonist having these clones was a poisonous point, but later it seemed that it was okay. Therefore, all kinds of love lines are quite stable, there is no harem behavior, and the various clones can be regarded as pure love (?) Another point is that the update speed is too slow, and from the long chapter transition, it is obvious that the protagonist's attitude towards Terra's local creatures has changed. At the beginning, everyone except Sarkaz was killed, and later on, those who could cooperate with him and were in the same camp as him could be retained. The change in the protagonist's attitude was quite smooth, and the readers did not have the feeling that the protagonist's attitude changed all of a sudden. It is a good Ark novel and is worth recommending.

It's a pity that there are so few people. The emotional lines don't take up much space but are natural. The characters are almost non-ooc and the plot direction is also interesting.

After reading ten chapters, I found that only the Doctor can defeat him [face covering] The protagonist's love for the Doctor and the Creator has reached an almost yandere level [face covering] If the Doctor openly denies the meaning of his existence, the protagonist may go crazy or self-destruct. However, Dr. Amnesia just doesn't approve of his style, but he still regards him as his own, which completes his character design.

Except for the strange writing techniques, the rest is top-notch among Arknights fan fiction. Recommended It feels like it's getting more and more boring. Some things can be streamlined, but there are too many things. Moreover, there is no focus anymore. I can't see any obvious main line. I can still tell that the author may have wanted to remedy the situation by adding a future thread, but it was too mixed. Overall, it doesn't feel like I'm watching a story, it feels like I'm watching a story mixed with a lot of unofficial history, plus a narration with an unknown subject. The look and feel is too confusing.

You can ignore the protagonist Oldham, but you cannot ignore the main supporting character Torre. (It can be seen that one day) As the war spread, the inaction of the Chamber of Commerce intensified the conflicts in Casimir society. Torre, who often fought on the first front of the resistance, gradually gained recognition from the knights in the war. His reputation grew day by day, and the masses became more and more supportive of his development. His achievements spread to further countries, foreign authorities gradually recognized his status, and his subordinates became more loyal. When the war situation worsened (the independent knights were defeated), the people of Casimir, who were in dire straits (in the north) and under the threat of war (in the south), became more and more dissatisfied with the incompetent government, the knights on the expedition became more and more angry at the difficult situation, and the external countries became more and more desperate for Casimir to hold the battle line. All these created the foundation for the new king to ascend the throne! One On a new day, casimir, Make a declaration to all existence! "All the people of Casimir! Corrupt rulers No longer able to bring prosperity to our country! " One by one "It's visible! When Ursus fell, With his ridiculous insect allies, Menacing, Wants to invade Casimir's sacred territory" "It's the great knight king one by one Torre! It was he who established a line of defense against foreign enemies, Those disgusting invaders, All were wiped out on the front line. " "It was he who established the group and structured the system. Through economic foreign trade and industrial development, Supply and people's livelihood are guaranteed. " "It is he who makes foreign friends and defends against foreign enemies. Turn the tide before it falls, Help the building to collapse! " It's him, Will Casimir, Saved from the war! He saved all the people of Casimir! " "Great knight emperor! One by one His fame is spread all over the world and his power is powerful in all directions. Make the enemy flee! He is brave and powerful, and leads the army with gold and iron, Let the enemy's blood stain the battlefield! " "The new king has risen in the flames of war! " "How can we delay him! " "We declare today, To all intelligent creatures and unintelligent beasts, Declare! Tell all existence! " "The Rotten Casimir United Nations He has no right to crown the new king! " But! One by one The new empire of the Knights of Casimir Can offer his loyalty to his new king! ! ! " "Incompetent joint meetings are a thing of the past; Loyal Casimir meets his true master! " "I propose one by one The whole nation shouts for our emperor! The nation shouts for our empire! " "Your Majesty! Your Majesty! Your Majesty!!!" "Loyalty! Loyalty! Loyalty!!!" "Victory belongs to Casimir, Glory to the great Emperor! ! ! "

Absolutely a unique porridge article, I really like the family drama between Lao Ao and Haji Kai (laughs)

A very good book, the story content is very well integrated with the game background, and the characters are also very complete. It made me want to catch up on the plot after not reading it for a long time. The shortcoming is that I am worried that the book will be gone [face covering] The multi-threaded love line design of the avatar was a bit uncomfortable at first. It is a really good book. I personally feel that it is the best Ark fanfic ever written. The plot logic and character settings are perfect. I feel like I am reading an Ark novel. It feels strangely refreshing. The disadvantages are that I don't know why there are not many people, and I am worried that it will be discontinued. Also, the chapters at the back of the book are a little watery, and the plot is very slow. There are not too many updates every day.

It's pretty good to watch, but I always feel that the protagonist has been treated like a monkey by the people of future Terra, or that the protagonist "thought", "didn't care" and other reasons were used, which led to more serious consequences later, which is a bit uncomfortable.

Spoiler alert! ! ! Let me comment. I have basically read Tomato's current mainstream Arknights fanfics and some non-mainstream Arknights fanfics. I personally think it's okay to comment. I only evaluate the works here, and do not belittle the works. Look at it objectively. The overall plot is slow and the pace is not fast. There are certain loopholes in the plot and there are not many loopholes. It will not affect the viewing experience too much. , The character has a certain OOC, and the psychological description of the character is less. The character of the protagonist is not revealed from the beginning, but is slowly revealed through daily life later. It is not recommended for those who like to watch fast-paced movies. The work adds some interesting elements, such as the time traveled back from the future and the player doctor, which can provide some good There is a sense of expectation, especially for Dr. Player. You never know what the players will do. However, it may also cause the subsequent works to collapse due to the increase in the number of people. I suggest you be cautious here. The plot before the protagonist falls asleep is not explained, and there are certain words in it. If you have not understood Arknights, it is not built. I would like to give it a try. If you know it, it will look better. The overall work is slow. What are the plot holes and the characters are called? Most of the characters are not OOC. A few characters do have OOC. Overall, the work is worth watching and the author's updates are relatively stable. The words in Tomato are okay.