Arknights: The Sarkaz Guest of Great Yan

It's okay. It's probably based on 209 BC to 202 BC and the history of the Western Han Dynasty, but the plot is a bit slow. The classical Chinese version of the prequel seems a bit laborious, but there is a translation, although I haven't read it much. All in all, I hope the follow-up will be better.

Good news. Some book friends have mentioned issues with the classical Chinese translation of the prequel. I think it is relatively easy to understand [Sentiment]. Book friends who are familiar with the Chu-Han War will not be affected by reading the prequel. The Lateran chapter and the interaction with the prince are very interesting 🥰. Now the plot is a bit slow [Punch]

Reminder message The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered. In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder. Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it would be like using a blunt weapon to frustrate the sharp, and it would be a waste of sharpness.

Where is the psychology committee member? I can't breathe. 😭I can't breathe. 😭I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe.

When I read this volume, every word is exquisite, the plot is ups and downs and the characters are as vivid as before. The foreshadowing is hidden in ingenuity, and the diction is elegant and skillful. When I read it, I forget the morning and dusk, and can't let go of the scroll. It is really a rare masterpiece in recent years. I'm taking a break from this chapter, but I'm still not finished. I'm worried about the follow-up development, and I'm tossing and turning. I hope you will not disappoint the public, write quickly, and update articles quickly to satisfy the thirst of thousands of readers. I am very fortunate!

Now there is a question. With the protagonist, the bond between the Doctor and Amiya is definitely not as deep as in the original work, where the Super Doctor alone recommends a human and a female. Without Amiya as the basis for the relationship between the Doctor and Terra, would the Doctor still choose to give Terra a chance? Without the ideological conflict between the Doctor and Lao Pu, Lao Pu wouldn't have left any chance when he blew up Rhode Island later, right? No matter how much the protagonist's combat prowess is raised, as long as Zhou's world view is still there, it will never be better than Lao Pu's. And won't Demon King Rabbit directly seal the world line without Botu CP? I looked at the front again, and there was a bug. If Xiao Te liked the protagonist, the doctor wouldn't be able to see the Origin Stone Flower. The doctor could only think that Terra would perish on its own when Lao Pu wakes up, and he wouldn't cooperate with Da Te to assassinate Xiao Te. Then how did the doctor lose his memory?

The writing is very good, but like the book Thirteen Years Old, it almost cannot last any longer (the implication is that you don't need to read it as an Arknights fanfic (it will be more fun this way) The customs and history of some races cannot be examined and errors may occur. This is inevitable, especially since the author got the surnames of Dayan Kingdom wrong before. Although everyone can put this issue aside, it is still a bit worrying overall. I hope the author will work hard, after all, those who have the courage to write are all big guys (

How can I put it... It feels ok. The author's language proficiency is very good, so I have the desire to read it. It is currently the third Arknights book in my collection, and I haven't found anything bad about it for the time being. Come on, author.

A very delicious Arknights novel with a promising future and very good reading. As for the classical Chinese section above, the audience may be different, but it is still very good reading. I recommend it and hope to continue writing it!!!!

It looks good so far, and the author's writing is good. There are some chapters in the past written by the author in ancient Chinese, but those are similar to history books that record the protagonist's past and are shaping the protagonist. Secondly, there are translations in the author's comment area. And if you watch the extra, please remember that the extra is in a parallel world (mainly The author is so excited 🤦), don't mess with the main text. Next, if everyone wants to see the millet and bubbles, the author hasn't written it yet (let's hurry up and urge the author [laughing]). Finally, the author divides it into paragraphs. Some pages in the front are not enough for one paragraph. In my opinion, others will look a little tired.