Arknights: Starting from Zero, Traveling Across Terra

Writing in strict chronological order... Is actually quite challenging. After all, a novel is not a chronicle/chronicle of major events. When I was writing the outline, I wrote whatever I thought was interesting, but it was very difficult to fill in the gaps between major events and make the events more reasonable. Moreover, when writing this way, the degree of freedom is also reduced a lot. You can't arbitrarily insert plots that you find interesting, and readers may not find it interesting either. At the beginning of the novel, I once thought about recording the past few years in as much detail as possible, but let alone the readers, I felt that it was a bit of a rundown. Alas, I feel that life is so boring sometimes. It would be even more boring to write a novel based on life. Without wild imagination and insufficient freedom, I always feel that a lot of things are missing. Just like when I eat something, I always feel that something is missing. But I have already put myself into it, so let's follow this framework. The protagonist can leave his original life and start over, but I can't remake it. I try to think positively. Perhaps a peaceful life is like calm water in a reservoir, containing infinite potential energy. The moment of explosion was so heroic precisely because it was so peaceful. When I was imagining the peaceful rural life of the protagonist, I couldn't help but feel envious. When I suddenly realized, "Brother, it's time to go," I felt a little reluctant to leave. I tried to make his boring life take up less space, but I knew my future ideas and outlines. I suddenly realized that this was his last peaceful life. By the time of Chapter 12, I really couldn't bear to leave it. I'm sorry, Brother Yiming, hurry up and get on your way. Many operators are still waiting for you in the future, and many readers are also looking forward to your growth and your story. The same is true for the integrated sports chapter. Team building, team planning and even high-intensity battles gradually become boring and numb. However, one day, such calm will break out, and perhaps the boringness of the past will become a precious memory. When I wrote this review, the data I saw was very poor, but there were still people willing to update it. I understand, it was very poor, but not that bad. I have escaped a lot of things in my life, and I still have to escape when I write a book. Brother, are you still a human being? In any case, I want to give an explanation for my story, an explanation for my brother Yiming, and an explanation for the readers who are still willing to follow up. Only after I got started did I realize that many of my writing methods were actually... Inappropriate. After all, they were written according to strict time, and I trapped myself. The novel definitely needs to attract attention and have a lot of explosive points for everyone to read, but with my weird writing method, uh, Brother Yiming cannot encounter explosive points 360 days a year. Of course, it was me who caused Brother Yiming to be less explosive, so I'm sorry to Brother Yiming. Readers who are passing by, I know that everyone's time is precious, and no one is willing to "taste" the boring daily life again, but if you want to see where Brother Yiming can go in the end, you can read it occasionally. The calmness also contains majestic power. Witness the key moments of Brother Yiming's destiny. Believe me, it can definitely provide some unforgettable experiences. Why do I suddenly have this confidence again? Because I know that I am indeed empathizing with the characters in the book, and I have indeed poured some of my emotions into it. There must be a sentence in the vast text that can touch you. What provided energy for the heroic explosion was not only Brother Yiming's peaceful experience in the past, but also my life and the potential energy in my life. If this can't touch even one person, I think I must be completely boring. Being able to go to the end with someone and witness something important together is, at least for me, a very luxury thing. I envy Brother Yiming very much. I always feel that my life is not going up. I can see the end at a glance and it may become more and more hopeless in the future. As for Brother Yiming, he suffered a lot, but got a lot more things than me, and he traveled to many more places than me. Didn't you say you should be more active? Why did it start again... Ah, no matter what happens during the journey, I will accompany Brother Yiming on the journey. If he reaches the end of the story and finally grows into a man who stands upright, then I will also grow a lot. I dare not say that readers should grow up together, that would be too arrogant. But this journey must be Brother Yiming's growth, and also my growth. When this book reaches its end, it will probably transform into a million-word masterpiece. What will we transform into by then? I hope our lives will all be better by then. I would also like to mention Arknights, but the fact that I am willing to write so many things for it should be enough to prove my love for it. As for the operators that Brother Yiming met during his journey, my preference may not play a big role, because I want him to slowly walk around Terra, and then imagine: What historical events will he encounter? Who will he meet? Who will be his true love? I'm not that interested in the history we live in anymore, because I can't change anything anymore, but when I see Brother Yiming participating in some historical events of Terra, I have an illusion: I might have such power, and I can change many things - and it's possible, this is not an illusion. Anyway, readers, I'm glad to meet you, and I hope we can all have a better life. Half a year later, more than one million words have been coded one after another, but the ratings are still not out, and the number of readers is hovering around 1,000. It will soon become a "potential good book" again. Such a result cannot be explained by my bad luck. It can only show that the problem with this book is really big. Then I should not blindly recommend this book to all readers. I have to assume that if I were a reader of this book rather than an author, where would I have persisted? Around twelve chapters, the boring rural life in Ursus made me have to abandon the book. There were also messy extras that took up space and affected the viewing experience. Around Chapter 50 or 60, after a long period of struggle and sacrifice, the integration movement still has not touched Qiecheng, and the protagonist still cannot see much of a clear personality, as if he is just a follower of Tallulah. About a hundred chapters in, I still haven't seen many familiar operators in this Arknights fanfic, and the timeline is still far away from the main line. Is it necessary to continue reading? Around Chapter 180, I have already adapted to the style of the Ursus chapter after reading this. I am fully expecting the protagonist's career to reach a higher level, but the author only sends knives one after another; the reality is already so difficult, why do I have to face it in the book? Around the 200th chapter, the huge gap is unbearable, but the rhythm of the narrative does not speed up, and the passage of time seems to be getting slower and slower. I probably have a disease. I always consider the constraints of reality when creating fantasy, and I over-consider the rationality of reality in fantasy writing. I will wonder if the protagonist can meet some characters familiar to Ark players in this situation. If there is absolutely no intersection, then I will not write it. Doing this is "thankless". I not only have to consider the protagonist's action trajectory, but also the action trajectories of more characters at different times. Can the protagonist achieve victory and further development without any cost? Even though it wasn't written explicitly, I still secretly marked the price for him. So the protagonist suddenly encountered changes in the peaceful countryside of Ursus, and the protagonist suddenly encountered an accident when his career was flourishing... I would also think that the protagonist has no system, no gifts at the beginning, and does not have much specialness in his physique, so can his life withstand a long battle? Everything is written based on reality, so why create? So I will also use the "author's big hand" appropriately—— Tallulah happened to pass by the protagonist's small village. The apostle team passed through southern Ursus After the doctor and Amiya met, they did not rush back to the Tower of Babel, but traveled to more places Shirter can meet the protagonist on the road The conflict between Chen Huijie and Wei Yanwu broke out earlier Qiu Bai arrived at Yumen a few years in advance and met Zhongyue a few years in advance. My physics level should only be at the high school level, so I believe in mechanical determinism. As long as I set a few starting parameters and let the rest develop, the trajectory of my destiny will be determined. In other words, the plot of this book is like a handful of meat pigeons, and I just set the starting seeds, and then my remaining tasks are just writing and narration. Doing this will make the plot less interesting overall and lack a lot of artificially created dramatic conflicts, which will also make the book less to the taste of many readers. But I still decided to write it like this. "All happy families are the same, but every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way." Most readers have similar tastes, so I will write a book with a unique taste. Just like the same ingredients can be used to make different dishes, the same dishes can also have different tastes, and chefs can also customize them What kind of pizza crust do you like? Hand shot? Iron plate? Crispbread? Or some Zhixin, volcano, or something more exotic? The unique taste may not be liked by most people, but it may make many friends want to change their taste after they are tired of it. My unique chronological and realistic Ark fanfic also has a "mission" - not many condiments are added, and the bottom of the cake is too thick to the point of choking, but maybe, some people will really like it?

The writing is really good, but the quality of the first two or three chapters is worse than other chapters; the plot is organized and not brainless. Reading the previous chapters will not let me guess a lot of the plot behind it, which makes me want to read on. However, I can write less small theater at the beginning of each chapter. I feel that some chapters have too many small theater words [learned] The first two volumes were fine, but the quality really deteriorated in the third volume. This is also a common problem of being out of touch with the main story.

It brings back the feeling I had when I watched "Arknights Too Real". It always breaks out at just the right place of depression. The rhythm is very comfortable. It is very suitable for me who neither likes the weak protagonist nor Long Aotian. Support, looks good

It's very interesting, but it's just not suitable for me. First of all, I have a slight dyslexia. The difficulty in reading the article makes me very irritated. Let's talk about why it is not smooth. Because the male protagonist in the book has two names, one is Ursus's name Ivan, the other is Yanguo's name Yiming, and the other two names are The words switch back and forth, which makes it difficult for me to read immersedly. From time to time, I have to check whether the name is that of the male protagonist. This is my own problem and has nothing to do with the quality of the article. I also hope that the author's writing will get better and better, and I also hope that there will be more and more readers₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's a very good book, but why isn't it rated? [What] Resurrect me, author, you are lazy again🥺

The characters in this book are flesh-and-blood, and the plot is very exciting but not very good.

Real guerrilla life, comrades with flesh and blood and different personalities, every battle is real and cruel. This book is a rare masterpiece in this land It's good but not popular, I'm afraid the author will run away 🥺

Five-star praise, as it should be. (Zhongli drinks tea). JPG

It's pretty good. The characters are more three-dimensional. They are either pure villains or pure bad guys, and decent people are pure good people 👍👍👍 It's really wonderful, the ups and downs of the plot are impressive 👍👍👍

Author Sang, I am actually a fan of yours. In fact, you have written a good paragraph in the previous section. I love reading it and hope you can continue. Moreover, this book has three female protagonists in the reviews, and now it only has two female protagonists. I love reading your books. I was very excited when I watched the part of "Once We Were Bosommates, No Regrets Again", including the emotional scenes in the book, I liked them all, and the career line was also written very passionately. The only thing I don't like in this book is the part where Black Snake replaces the protagonist, but I also understand that this is to promote the development of the plot after all, so that the protagonist can meet Qiu Bai.