I Transferred to Tokyo and Met the One-Winged Girl

This is the first time I read the light novel style. Although it is the first time for the author to write, it can be seen that he has worked hard to perfect the story bit by bit with his pen (keyboard). The first perspective and split screen are like movie shots, showing us the story of the life change of the heroine Qianyu. She finally grows another wing and can freely pursue a better future. In the end, the agreement made by Qiu Yushou under the shrine is really romantic and full of pictures. I think it would definitely be very good to turn it into comics or even anime (I actually don't know much about these but I know that it probably won't be possible) and I'm looking forward to the extra chapter! (Bibi in a low voice: Let's forget about the second book)

Very good, I feel like watching Riqing. At present, there is no party struggle. Although the male protagonist has contact with the female partner, they are friends. The female partner makes me feel more like the CP boss [I learned it]

It's a very good Japanese-style novel. The plot and foreshadowing are quite coherent (although I personally don't like foreshadowing like Ao no Kanata Quartet). However, there is a small problem. The switching of perspectives feels a bit fragmented. Compared with the "Sister's Life" that I have read, which also likes dual perspectives, the perspective switching of the perspective of a step sister's life is done in a diary-like manner through chapters. Each chapter switches perspectives after the content of that day is finished. Dual perspectives are used to supplement the day and tell things that the other party does not know. Emotional changes. The general feeling of the book so far highlights the psychological changes of the woman "afterward". And because the process of perspective switching is sequential, it still feels a bit sudden with only one line of dividing line as a reminder. But overall it looks pretty good. I'll just base my remarks on my first impression.

It's really good-looking and the content is not ridiculous. I like daily articles😍

After reading it, it was pretty good. The heroine is very cute, and the male protagonist is also a Japanese standard Asasi male protagonist. The only flaw is that after the confession, there is suddenly no sense of expectation. Sure enough, it is still the same sentence: What is really worth remembering is not the love period, but the ambiguity before the confession, and the emotions during the confession. In addition, I am very grateful to this novel, which taught me a sentence: Confession should be a reward, not a lottery. In the future, I may be like this sentence, cautiously trying to figure out her thoughts, and finally "reward"

The atmosphere of Nikkei is particularly strong. I have seen a lot of Nikkei before, and the atmosphere is quite good. The whole book is based on the encounter, acquaintance, understanding, and later love between Ye Bai and Huajiang Qianyu. The book uses this as a clue throughout the entire text (although the author has said that his writing is poor, but I feel it is better than mine [facepalm]). There are a lot of emotional descriptions or psychological descriptions in the whole book, and the characters are very detailed, which is amazing. However, after the confession, the overall quality and length feel a bit down, but overall it's still pretty good, come on! ! I think the author can write about some small interactions between Ye Bai and Huajiang Qianyu after falling in love (this can be used as a side story). That's about it.

The dialogue between the characters fits what I understand. Then, the emotions are handled very well. There is no mention of emotional entanglements with other girls. The plot is just a little anxious. I know that I like the other girl, but I hypnotize the other person to think that he may not like me. Everything else is pretty good. Good cheers for the author! [You taste carefully]

Nice! It's really too short, too short! The main thing is that every time the protagonist says something, I am unexpected. I feel that the supporting characters are a little missing. I am looking forward to the travel chapter! I stayed up all night reading it, and I kept dozing off in class the next day.

The pioneer of this kind of light novel, the opening chapter is really amazing, the unexpected plot unfolds, and the twists and turns are just right, which left a big shock in my little heart, and I can't put it down now. I strive for a perfect ending, but I am afraid of the sadness at the end, a combination of contradictions, but as I continue to deepen, I finally understand that the story has an ending, and the ending is not the end. Keep it in your heart, it is eternity, just think of me as an innocent romantic. In my heart, they will keep going until the end of the world. Dear author, thank you. It is because of you that I feel a little more sad and a little heavier. We will eventually meet again hand in hand! Come on!

It has the style of a Japanese light novel, sweet but not greasy, with sugar sprinkled in every detail. The first person and different perspectives gave me a refreshing feeling. The language description is very good. The action and psychological descriptions hope that the author can go further. I look forward to the author's next book.