You Call This Raising a Maiden?

Next, I will use the most upright, straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, cleanest, most frank and magnanimous, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, and not piling up flowery rhetoric. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout ideas, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be sophisticated, and does not add unnecessary cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, and every sentence is sincere and true. The expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, and no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that it does not contain any empty words, so neat that it does not contain any nonsense, so magnanimous that no reservations are hidden, and it is so popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful. It is refreshing and direct without being procrastinating. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without foreshadowing. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being ostentatious. It is clear and clear without being vague. It is frank and candid without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

In this book, the three concepts of language logic are all online, but they are not too outstanding. In short, there are no major shortcomings. As for why this book has so few readers, I only saw this book on the recommendation list after logging out. In other words, Tomato will recommend some high-quality novels to logged-in users that he thinks are good. Well, in the end I hope the author can continue the story and make the male protagonist normal and not like some crazy guy. There is nothing to say about the three views of the protagonist of this book. As for why only a few thousand people are reading it? This is because of Tomato's recent god-making plan.

Comprehensive evaluation: 9.4-9.6 (Above five stars) Character creation (protagonist group): 9+ (top tomato) Character creation (generalized protagonist group): 8+ (first-rate) Character creation (non-protagonist group): 5.5 (No style) Plot design/setting arrangement: 10 (enjoyed) Worldview perfection level: 7 (reality-modification) Personal influence: 5 (tied calmly)

It's delicious 😋, not bad, there's nothing to say about the plot, the author is great, I want to see the protagonist lose his vest! At present, it seems that Ning Yuan has discovered the identity of the protagonist. I love to watch Ning Yuan's plots. Please write more about when Ning Yuan's eyes can be cured. Of course, I also love to watch Ye Xili's plots. After all, who doesn't like the fragrant, soft, glutinous, sweet, silly and cute rich lady? [Sneaky smile] 👍 ❤️ Support Ye Xili to grow up and Ning Yuan to become smaller [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] Of course, you know the author, I want to see Shura Field, when will the fight start, I want to see the river of blood, and can you give the protagonist a knife? Also, the author, it seems that I really need to discipline you, why are you only updating twice in one day [smile][smile][smile] Write quickly, it's not enough. In short, the author, keep up the good work ❤️❤️❤️

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M14 waist shots would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

It's very interesting. Let me talk about the character of the protagonist in the book. In my opinion, the protagonist is the kind of person who is relatively indifferent to the outside world (part of the reason is that the narration in the book focuses on psychological activities, mainly objectively describing what the protagonist did, and less describing the character's actions and environment in paragraphs) but the kind of person who longs for relationship connection in his heart, because of his cover-up for Ning Yuan's suspicion. He is very clumsy, even to the point of being clumsy (not in a derogatory sense, because the performance in the article is very interesting and can be regarded as a characteristic). He has many ways to get rid of suspicion, but from my perspective, he chose the one that he is least accustomed to and the most clumsy. From this, it can be seen that he still longs for this kind of relationship in his heart. Also, this is just a small suggestion. Given that the description of action in the book is relatively sparse, the protagonist's subconscious body reaction during the dialogue will be very abrupt. (Description of finger twitching during the test) In summary, the feature of this book is that the description of the protagonist's own life is relatively sparse (it may be a bit strange to say this, because the protagonist's life seems a bit thin), the highlight is the interaction and game with the girls (?), The redemption line is buried relatively deep (actually not too deep, according to the setting, but it is the most reasonable), and the plot progresses slowly and smoothly. Very good work, keep it up ❤️

Next, I will use the most upright, straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, cleanest, most frank and magnanimous, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, and not piling up flowery rhetoric. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout ideas, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, and does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, every sentence is sincere and true, the whole process is in plain language, there is no subtlety or concealment, every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple and unpretentious. , The expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that there is no empty words, so neat that there is no nonsense, so frank that no reservations are hidden, and so popular that it is popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and frank without being tactful. It is refreshing and direct without procrastination. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without paving the way. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being ostentatious. It is clear and clear without being vague. It is frank and candid without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

I didn't expect it to be so delicious😋 The supporting characters are delicious🥰, the protagonist is delicious😇, the writing is delicious😘, the plot design is delicious😃, the pace is a bit slow😡, the comment area for readers to discuss the plot is also delicious🤓, and the author is also delicious😍 This is the second time I have read your book. The first time was the one by the comic artist. I stopped reading it after reading dozens of chapters. I thought it was not to my taste. I didn't have high hopes at first, but... I didn't expect you to be able to write it to this point! Not to be abstract, to be honest, except for the slow pace, I personally don't think there's anything bad to say about it, but since it's written about multiple women, it's understandable. Only one female protagonist knows about the protagonist's identity, and she should be the calmest one after knowing it (after all, there are speculations) In short, I think there is nothing you can do better except the update speed. I am very picky and this is one of the few novels that I can praise. Of course, if you fail later, I will also come to support you. After all, I am best at popping champagne.

It's still very good to read it now. The overall plot does not have much ups and downs, it is much smoother, but it is also very attractive. The character setting is also very good. The girls that have been developed now include: the soft and waxy young lady who lacks independent opinions, and the one-eyed girl who was persecuted by her native family and wanted to commit suicide but was saved by the male protagonist and gradually opened her heart after getting along with her. If there are multiple female protagonists, I hope the author will accept them all, instead of making them into multiple ambiguities, but only accept one.

Good looking From what I can see so far, there is nothing sinister about it. The only shortcoming may be that in order to promote the plot, the author has put a lot of effort into some things, but it is only limited to promoting the relationship between the characters. For example, going to the school of one of the heroines through exchange students, and then naturally having certain exchanges offline. After all, wouldn't it be fun to discover a book like this? 😏 And this kind of writing method often appears in other novels, there is always "the way of heaven" 😏 Both the writing and the plot are very good, you can watch it with confidence