
The Outcast: Exposing Iconic Scenes, Awei's Eighteen Moves
一人之下:曝名场面,阿威十八式
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- 231k Words
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- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Fanqie
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117Chapters
42Reads
5.5Score
4Listens
170.9kReads · all time
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I really thought it was a famous scene [eating melon] After watching it, it turns out that most of the videos were made by you yourself [laughing awkwardly] I'm really speechless [stop]
Why do you want to blackmail Jia Zhengliang? , Although it is annoying, changing the facts is even more disgusting and has a bad impact.
Just watch it for fun, change the character, tamper with the facts, (famous scene), save points
Write famous scenes, just write famous scenes. Originally, I came here to read the famous scenes. The title of your book is also based on this to attract people. If you like Fengshayan, you will like Fengshayan. Just compete normally. You are the author. Are you afraid that you won't be able to compete with me? At worst, just don't let go of that 500 a night thing. Change the plot: Feng Shayan and Jia Zhengliang have never met in the competition venue, or his mobile phone has not been damaged. Is it that difficult? He is always a simple and honest person, why bother if you just change him to another kind of person. He doesn't have any negative fans. You don't deserve the scolding. You said that his personality has been changed, why don't you just make it clear in the first picture? Just talk about changing the character. Who knows what kind of character you are talking about? It is completely opposite to the original work. Also, you, the protagonist, have to be under the Tianxiahui to participate in the Luotian Dajiao? He lets go of all strangers under the age of 30 in the world. You can do it by yourself. If you get his daughter and then get the Tongtianlu from the Luotian Dajiao, you can use this to propose marriage to Feng Zhenghao and get his daughter to marry you. How could he refuse to add his daughter's happiness to a movie called "Eight Magic Skills"?
How to say it? If you want to expose a famous scene, then expose it, but you can't say you're going to make it up! It's okay to make unwarranted guesses, but don't ruin your character! Good guy, it's obviously 500 a night, Jia Zhengliang, you changed it! I really can't stand it, you're so broken! Everything else is fine, even if you start some conspiracy theories later, it's fine, but don't let that joke fall apart! Good guy! There's nothing wrong with you trying to make a conspiracy, after all, you're a fan! But I came here for your famous exposure scene! In the end, you broke that joke for him.
There is a very big problem in Chapter 19. You changed what happened and added a new one, but there were witnesses at the end of the whole thing, and the protagonist was too hung up, and the protagonist's strength is obviously different from that in the clip. In a real fight, everything is missed, and others will see problems when they see it. You might as well write the ending as it originally happened, and then the protagonist takes a walk after eating, Jia Zhengyu makes a sneak attack, the protagonist blocks it and finally defeats Jia Zhengyu, then makes up the protagonist's advice to Jia Li, and finally Feng Shayan comes over and highlights the protagonist's attention shift through the camera. This highlights Jia Zhengyu's despicability and also gives others a good impression of the protagonist. Isn't this better than making random changes?
This type of novel is best without a protagonist
If you want to expose something, do it well. If you want to expose something privately, please do so. And you have a hundred years of cultivation and a complete mastery of the Sky Shuttle. Not to mention that you are invincible in the world, and you can be alone. Why are you still a 2B?
I thought about changing the character of Jia Zhengliang. He may not be a bad person, but the pretense is real, and the original arrangement of the scene between him and Feng Shayan was so classic. When the two of them fought, I thought about what would happen next. In the end, the two of them were together. It's nothing classic, but when Jia Zhengliang spoke for Feng Shayan, he actually hit Feng Baobao, which was inexplicable. Just speak for others, why hit others? In the end, I changed a few chapters of Jia Zhengliang, but not many of his words will appear in the future.
It was quite interesting at first, but I felt sick after reading Chapter 19 [vomited]