The Outcast: Exposing Iconic Scenes, Awei's Eighteen Moves
一人之下：曝名场面，阿威十八式
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- The Outcast: Exposing Zhang Lingyu and Xia He Getting Cozy一人之下：曝光张灵玉夏禾玩贴贴Alternate title on Fanqie
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117Chapters
61Reads · 30 days
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You really thought it was a famous scene? 🍉 But after watching it, it turns out most of it was just a video you made up yourself 😅 Speechless [Bookmark]
Why smear Jia Zhengliang? While he's disliked, altering the facts is even more disgusting and has a negative impact.
Just take it as a joke. Change the character design. Falsifying facts (名场面), Storage points
If you're going to write about iconic scenes, then write about iconic scenes. People are already reading for those iconic scenes, and your book title is just trying to attract readers. If you like Feng Shayan, then like Feng Shayan. Let's have fair competition. You're the author; it's your job. Are you afraid of losing? At worst, you can just not include that "500 yuan a night" thing.
Well, what can I say? If you want to reveal a memorable scene, fine, but you can't fabricate it! Making baseless guesses is fine, but don't ruin the character! Good grief, it was clearly 500 yuan a night, Jia Zhengliang, you changed it! I really can't stand it, you've completely messed it up!
Chapter 19 has a major problem. You changed the events and added a completely new one, but the ending has eyewitnesses, and the protagonist's power level is too high. Furthermore, the protagonist's strength is clearly different from what was shown in the clips. If there were a real fight, everything would be exposed, making it obvious to everyone that something is amiss.
This type of novel is best without a protagonist.
If you're going to expose something, then expose it properly. What's with the hidden agenda? Besides, you have a century of cultivation and complete mastery of the Sky-Piercing Shuttle. You might not be invincible, but you can certainly take on anyone. Why are you still acting like a fool?
I've thought about changing Jia Zhengliang's character. He might not be a bad person, but his pretentiousness is undeniable. Furthermore, the original novel arranged his scenes with Feng Shayan in such a classic way—their fight scene immediately made me anticipate what would happen next, and sure enough, they ended up together.
It was quite interesting at first, but I got disgusted after reading chapter 19 🤮