The Outcast: This Is Absurd, They All Say I'm a God!

Overall, it's really good. The biggest question is why you want to add a real person into it. Seeing that Dong Chichi is particularly easy to cause drama, you can just write a fanfic of the original work or add some original characters. It seemed very enjoyable at first, but once I saw that name, I lost interest in reading it.

High-dimensional gods can't resist low-dimensional nuclear bombs. Why, bro, are your three-dimensional people afraid of two-dimensional attacks, that is, anime attacks? Can they hit you? You either have to change the outline again, or you can only take it off the shelves and rewrite it. Believe me, buddy, just the fear of damage from low-dimensional nuclear bombs when you increase the dimension can persuade a lot of people. Nuclear bombs are not as strong as you think, and all the nuclear bombs in the world combined cannot destroy the earth. One of the gods you wrote in is afraid of nuclear bombs.

On the surface, the protagonist looks calm and calm, but from the details, I feel that the protagonist is very impetuous in his bones. He does things in a hurry without considering the consequences. It is very in line with the personality of modern people, but he is not like a true practitioner and is still far from the realm of others.

How come you can't beat just one person when you're so high-ranking? It does seem a bit frustrating to watch. And the character Feng Baobao may be your own setting. But it's really unpleasant. When writing fan fiction, you still have to respect the setting of the original work. If you don't want to have a heroine, you can actually just write it without a heroine. Alas, here is a way to avoid thunder.

Relying on the defense, the setting and imagination are very good, but the author's routines are very old-fashioned, and the writing is too poor. The protagonist seems to be very weak, but in fact no one can beat him. The moves are obviously not strong, but they are useless after one or two uses. The protagonist's character is too dry and wretched. After two years of meditation and self-cultivation on Mount Tai, have you eaten? In order to gain popularity, adding a real-life character is even more outrageous. It seems nondescript and a proper work for junior high school students.

I originally thought the writing was okay, so why did I add a real-life Internet celebrity? You said that when he shows up, you can just be a passerby. You still insist on writing people with the same meaning, is that interesting? I won't tell you whether it's a drama or not when watching it. You ask a group of people who only watch anime and manga to watch the live-action version. It was already very promising, but what we imagined in our minds was the anime or manga version. During the scene, a real face suddenly popped up, and I wanted to ask the author, what were you thinking about?

It's hard to evaluate after reading the introduction. Why is the protagonist so popular? Nonono, the protagonist is very strenuous even playing a supporting role. He is both good and pretentious. He shouts that he has no money while giving basically all the money he has to a female anchor who has only met once. And if you look at the introduction, it is said that this and that are very popular. It is not at all. The person who announces does not listen to the protagonist's orders, and it is also very unreasonable.

A very good book. I really like reading it.

As a god who cannot withstand the world and must ascend, he cannot withstand nuclear bombs, so he randomly changes the original plot and character settings, and adding a real character into it is a big show, and the setting is greedy for money. Just for a female anchor, you can earn tens of millions. You are so awesome in the main role. You are either this god or that god. In the end, no one can beat you. What is this if it's not shit?

1. The setting of gods. Gods are just powerful aliens. It's just that the world can't bear the rising latitude. Well done. The world can't bear the power and can't withstand nuclear bombs. 2. I don't know what the use of adding Dong Chichi is. 3. The protagonist's temperament after two years of training in Mount Tai is not as good as that of ordinary people. 4. Skills, what's the use of that Xuan Lei? It always misses people. If it does hit, it doesn't cause any damage. It's just a matter of praying to the gods. Others are average