The Outcast: I Am the Bad Marshal, Shocking the Outcast World

That's very speechless. The protagonist was praised for his strength at the beginning, like a god, but everyone thinks that the protagonist is not as strong as Zhang Lingyu. The protagonist can play clarinet and several temporary workers. With such awesome strength, everyone thinks that he can't beat Zhang Lingyu. Everyone mentions Zhang Lingyu from the beginning to the end. Everyone has to compare the protagonist with Zhang Lingyu. If passersby don't brag about Zhang Lingyu, he will die. I don't know whether the protagonist of this book is the protagonist himself or Zhang Lingyu. This book is too low. The other protagonists are all competing with Laotian Master, and the first one is compared with Lao Tianshi's apprentice. I don't want to read it. The whole article is boasting about Zhang Lingyu. Who is the protagonist of this article? Don't you know who you should brag about? Don't you know the most basic thing like this?

I am teasing you, be overbearing but not overbearing, Tiangang is definitely the pure white color of Zhiyang Zhigang. Write it in black. No matter how you write about Li Xingyun, I won't criticize you. If you write about the handsome man, why don't you be more rigorous? The more you read, the more outrageous you are. The plot of 666 is purely based on the traffic of the handsome man.

The black Tiangang Jueqian seems to be from Tiangang Legend. Some plots feel like Ghost King. Yuan Tiangang Tiangang Jue in Bad People doesn't seem to be black.

It's too ink-blazing. I played almost 30 chapters of a temporary worker game without finishing it, and the temporary worker's strength is about the same as Zhang Lingyu's. As a result, you wrote that Zhang Lingyu's strength is unfathomable, and you wrote trash about the temporary worker, and the strength setting is vague.

Let's talk about the feeling. It seems quite unpleasant. You can't kill this. Is this a commander-in-chief?

I saw the first picture and didn't understand what it was. And I feel like this writing is a bit watery. The introduction didn't make it clear who he was, so if you know what the plot is, it just started. No information is revealed at all

Thank goodness it's not a role-playing system. If it were, it would be 10% better. You didn't show the boss's domineering behavior at all. He was just as domineering as a child getting a toy. Alas, 1

I like this style very much

This writing is a bit inconsistent with normal logic. The author's own setting is a bit different from that of Bad Handsome. If you want to say that Bad Handsome is powerful, he is indeed powerful, but not that powerful. First of all, he does not belong to God. Secondly, his expressiveness is not that exaggerated, so his specific strength cannot be inferred. But if you want to say that he is overwhelming, it is really impossible for him to reach that level.

It seems that he still doesn't understand the commander very well. He can kill whoever he wants and no one can stop him.