Longevity: I Won’t Be a Prince, I’ll Become an Immortal

Different from the mainstream cool novels, it truly depicts the frustration and helplessness of the leader of a small affiliated country facing the oppression of a big country and the oppression of ordinary mortals by immortal cultivators. The protagonist gradually grows from it, but the pace is relatively slow, and it feels that the role of being an immortal is not very important [eating melon]. In terms of poison [thinking], I think the main thing in the front is the unclean queen and her attitude towards the male protagonist, which is very unpleasant to watch [laughs awkwardly], as well as her thinking about her sweetheart and other behaviors. I hope that her affairs can be explained faster, or there will be less interactive words, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable to watch. Overall, it's not bad [laughs]. After all, the introduction says it is the experience of an immortal in the long river of time. Maybe the queen is just a passer-by who makes a few ripples in the long years of the male protagonist. Come on, author! I hope you can present what you want to present to the readers. [Like][Like][Like] The less I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel [punches], so the author is quick to update [angry]. How can this be enough? [Please update] The most important thing is that I hope there will be no eunuchs! No eunuchs! ! No eunuchs! ! ! (Of course, because your grades are really bad, if you want to be a eunuch, there's nothing I can do about it)

It's okay, it has a different flavor from Shuangwen, come on!

It looks pretty good so far. It doesn't have a big start, but the slow development of the little characters, which is pretty good. However, the queen's loss of virginity is still a bit unacceptable.

This is the first time I have seen such a good book. It is as good-looking as a man in his 40s. I welcome all book friends with joy [laughter]

The power of writing and writing style appealed to me, and it was well written. Apart from being unclean, the queen's character is okay. As long as you're not with the male protagonist, just find a way to deal with it.

This book reminded me that when reading a book, you should not just read the ratings and reviews. What you experience yourself is more real. The writing is very good, and the protagonist, who is the leader of a small country, is vividly written, and the sense of depression is really well expressed! The heroine problem. . . Whether it's poisonous or not depends on your own experience. Anyway, I feel pretty good. I can accept losing my virginity accidentally. After all, how many places can it be in reality? In addition, I feel that the description of the progression of the protagonist's strength is too perfunctory to the point where I still don't know what state the protagonist is in, and the system's presence is too weak and does not appear a few times in the whole article. But the main function of the system is immortality. I won't say anything about it, but you didn't show the role of immortality. That's your fault. Hope to correct

The writing, plot, etc. Are all good. With such a low rating, it's probably because Tomato's audience can't stand this kind of plot. The author has great writing skills and describes the scene well. Keep up the good work.

How can I put it this way? It's pretty good. It's written in a very realistic way. A small country is weak and its leader is humiliated. He doesn't say anything. It's a bit of a waste of money. There is also Miss Su. In the ancient setting of Immortal Cultivation + Dynasty, losing her virginity before marriage is indeed... It would be fine if she was just a tool to help the protagonist grow mentally, but if there is any subsequent plot of emotional intersection or reconciliation of past feuds, it would be really poisonous. The above is a review and some suggestions for the author. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

The writing is very good. I haven't read such slow and aggrieved writing in a long time. Because I read a comment about a queen who lost her virginity, I didn't want to read it at first. I wanted to squirt directly, but I wanted to squirt to the point, so I clicked in and finished reading. The writing is indeed slow, and the story of the queen is not developed, but I personally hate the longevity novel, the kind where Sima disbands his sword. In the end, I can accept whether the queen is real or fake. I can't accept it according to Y bar standards, and I can't accept it normally. But after watching it, I unexpectedly continued to watch it. Goldfinger is not very open, and the description of the queen is not too great. I don't want it to be a single female protagonist. I hope that brothers who think it is a poisonous point can give me a fair evaluation and wait for the author to give an ending, otherwise I am really afraid that he will cut it.

Good! Yes, I finished reading it in one go, and the author quickly updated it. In general, although the beginning is a little bit toxic, it is not unacceptable. I am excited after reading it, but it is a pity. This is destined to be a long-lasting novel, and I cannot carry the people I care about for a long time. This is quite regretful. However, the world is so big, there will always be encounters, one or two old friends in the vast road, meet and go through the vicissitudes of life. No matter what, it is always happy. I am excited to read it. Come on, come on.