A Lowly Bandit from the Start

The writing is exquisite! Full of characters! Wonderful story! The more you read, the more interesting it becomes! As an old bookworm, I haven't found a work that I want to update for a long time, and I am currently updating it. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not forget the original intention [learned]

After reading Chapter 22, although the expression in some places is a bit stiff and far-fetched, it is already very good for a new author. Five stars for encouragement. At the same time, I also had some feelings about the plot of the robbery and murder of the Lin Mansion. As a time traveler in the current era, the protagonist will feel very guilty when he sees the bullying of women and children, and will feel that he cannot face his heart, but when he kills those men, he does not feel such great psychological pressure and burden at all. Although the people of the Lin Mansion deserved their punishment for colluding with the bandits, are all those men evil? Isn't there something in them? Are they innocent people who are completely unaware? In the final analysis, the concept has been deeply rooted in the bone marrow. Men should bear more responsibilities and corresponding consequences than women. This situation is particularly obvious in many novels. The protagonists who favor justice in the camp often kill all the male members of the hostile family without caring, show hesitation to women and children, and are full of malice towards men. Of course, these are certainly not deliberate actions by the author, but are just common sense instincts. The above is just nonsense that I made based on my feelings, don't worry about it.

It's a very good article. It breaks away from the conventions of Internet articles and is more like the traditional martial arts where the protagonist cheats. The description of the characters is very good. The shortcoming is the literary youth, which is more than enough. A little literary youth is the finishing touch, but too much will make people irritating. The other thing is that too much ink is spent on irrelevant characters, that Zhu It's just that I don't know how the back part is arranged, and I don't know how the front part is useful. Overall, it's worth a read, especially for readers who are tired of online articles. You can read it, and those who like fast pace and cool articles should be cautious. At least I saw that Destroy the Tiger's Village didn't have any very cool plots, and instead started to write about youth again.

Not bad, not bad, really good. Unlike some authors and readers who stand up and talk without pain in their backs. They say anything about the Holy Mother and so on, and just cut them down if they want. They have all gone through nine years of compulsory education and have survived in this world for so long. However, the time-travelers don't have any sense of morality and ethics. They just kill people and spit them out. But this book is different. After the male protagonist killed someone, he was always condemned in his heart. Although I looked at the ink stains, I felt that this was how a normal person should behave. It's really well written!

A good book, but the writing style is destined to not score highly. Other writings only have the main stem without branches, but yours has branches and leaves so dense that it is difficult to see the main stem. In the early stage, there will be many people who can't stand your branches and leaves and abandon the book.

It's a good book, the characters are well-drawn, the plot is not obtrusive, and the connections are smooth. You can tell that it's an old author. I don't know what good works he has written before. The only thing lacking is probably that the writing is too detailed and the climax is a bit missing. If you can keep it from jumping, it will be a masterpiece in the snow.

This early stage is really great, the writing is smooth, the plot is tense and relaxed, the psychological description of the protagonist is just right, the author has enough experience and knowledge accumulation, the characters and world are realistic and convincing. Brother, where is your system, where is your mission, and where is your protagonist?

When writing a book, you need to have a general framework in mind. The process can be modified. You can write around the main line. You can do whatever you want, but you can't write where you want. Others are good. I hope my name can be changed, so I can travel around the world and change my name casually without anyone checking my ID card.

It's okay. The background of the world is explained in the middle. The writing is good, but it feels a little cumbersome. It's worth reading.

The writing is more than 90% higher than Tomato. It is considered a rare good book. Although some plots are briefly mentioned, at least a lot of nonsense is omitted. It seems that the author is writing a book for the first time. There are so few comments, which means that he is not a novice that everyone likes. Fast-food articles. The author keeps it up. Don't be lazy and ensure the quality. This book does not say "Fengshen". At least it has a high-grade appearance. I like it. This book is very good, but it will take about a month to update these pictures. You are going to enter the palace. It is very dangerous if you continue like this.