I Begin My Immortality in Primitive Society

Author! If this is written later, you can lead me to the world of Journey to the West. Me! I've been under a lot of mental stress lately, and I'm afraid I might not be able to control myself and find your home address. So please, it's best not to do that! Also, please update it quickly, otherwise I will forget about this book [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

This book is my favorite among the longevity novels I have ever read.

The writing is very good, the articles are relatively novel, the plot is compact, the characters are not so dull, and the protagonist is not Long Aotian from the beginning. It's also done step by step. I'm just worried that the protagonist's plot is advancing so fast that I won't have to write about it later, and the protagonist feels a bit too weak. Everything else is fine.

Waiting for the update, I stopped to read the comments, and there were so many low scores. The reasons for low scores are mainly divided into those who are too meticulous and those who are too timid. I don't know how the author did it, offending both sides at the same time. In fact, the protagonist has such a character, which is completely consistent with the decision of an ordinary person based on his heart. Is it necessary to have a standard of conduct for a time-travelling person? In addition to giving me a five-star rating, I also want to praise the author for the plot jump. He really put a lot of effort into not being too cliche and making people guess the direction [laughing and crying], constantly introducing new elements and digging holes. Many books jump from chapter to chapter because the plot outline is completely predictable. Although this book contains many flaws, for the sake of exploration, I did not skip a chapter.

It's very interesting. This is the first time I've read this kind of story written since the beginning of my cultivation. It has a female protagonist, and the male protagonist's character is quite in line with that of an ordinary person. I hope there will be more female protagonists (not harems) [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Yes, the logic is clear. Don't bother with the comment section. I haven't really thought about it. Traveling to another world makes you feel like you can just let it go. Brother Huozi is almost like time travel. Look at how miserable he was in the early stage. He really thinks of himself as the protagonist of the novel. Some novels even abuse the protagonist. Takuma's, you don't want to show it to others at the same time, the child just gives it to you casually! You are gasping for air!

Very well written. But since it's about cultivating immortals, you can give it to a female protagonist. There's nothing wrong with being immortal. If you're afraid that future generations will fail if you don't succeed, then you can lead them to practice by yourself.

There are many immortality articles. What I am quite satisfied with about this one is that it finally doesn't avoid women like other immortality articles. I support it with five stars. I hope I can keep writing it. It should be at least a million words long.

Although it is often said that you don't need to use your brain to read novels, his premise is that the writing is very enjoyable, so enjoyable that you can ignore some intellectual problems. The subject matter of this article is my favorite. There are not many articles, but there are always fantasies in my heart. I also admit that this kind of writing is difficult to write, ε=(´ο｀*))) Well, how can I put it, many immortality novels have a tragic color, The calmer the mood, the calmer we are, and the more carefully we are aware of the many shortcomings and loopholes in the text, just like correcting a composition. On the contrary, many popular novels also have many loopholes. Indeed, few people say that they even like the protagonist or a certain character in them. Their emotions are aroused, and they "just enjoy reading novels." How do you put it? It depends on what the author thinks. It can be that the subject of this book was not chosen and it is not good for the profit, or it can be a whetstone. You can improve yourself faster by seeing more of your own shortcomings.

In the primitive era, there were many dangers, and various mythical beasts were hidden in the dark. Who will be the final winner? Stay tuned for the next episode