I'll Cultivate After I Achieve Immortality. Once You All Die of Old Age, I'll Be Invincible

It's less about barely surviving and more about just barely hanging on; this world is far too cruel for ordinary people. The author's writing is excellent, demonstrating profound skill. Whether it's the skinny, yellow-skinned man or the wrinkled old man, they are microcosms of the lower classes, exuding a poignant sadness that evokes a sense of melancholy, somewhat reminiscent of Kong Yiji.

This is a very good book. The author clearly has a good pace, but many people are used to fast-paced, exciting stories and can't handle a slower pace and more depressing plots. Personally, I think this book is excellent; the writing is good, the atmosphere is beautiful, the plot is well-structured, and the descriptions are delicate. It has a realistic feel to the fantasy world. Keep up the good work, author! 😘

The author's writing is excellent, and the characters are well-developed. The old bodyguard's mundane life and tragic ending create a sense of realism in the story. The portrayal of the protagonist's humanity is also quite good, but it still needs improvement. Some parts are not well-developed, and the emotional impact is not strong. However, it must be said that it is very well written.

It's good. I've been enjoying reading books like this lately. The writing is also quite good. Unlike other books where the protagonist becomes invincible quickly, this one doesn't. The protagonist survives for over sixty chapters while still building up his foundation. And the protagonist is intelligent too. It's just that the daily updates are too few; it's simply not enough to keep you reading!

I strongly support the author and hope they maintain their current level of writing, even improving if possible. Please don't just update for the sake of updating. If you're really experiencing writer's block, I'm willing to wait. I've seen too many authors ruin their work by rushing to meet deadlines. I think the two female characters are the foundation for this book's success.

Hey hey hey! 😏 (Sorry for this sudden lapse in judgment~) Overall, this book shouldn't have any major problems... Right? I personally think there aren't any major issues. Author, just keep up the momentum and keep writing!! 😏😏😏😏 [Please update more frequently!]

That's really good. I like this kind of slow-burn novel. I'm tired of the fast-paced, wish-fulfillment stories. I don't like reading literary works that are delicate yet completely tragic, nor do I want to read wish-fulfillment novels that are all about overpowered protagonists yet completely comedic. This kind of slow-burn, ordinary, heavy, but short story is just what I like.

This ordinary, mundane process is what truly reflects the lives of ordinary people. All those wish-fulfillment fantasies about being invincible are just fluff. Simplicity is the best; an invincible start is too fake and tiresome. 🍉

It's alright. Those few flaws were just a little unpleasant for me. Seeing the premise that the only path to immortality is through extremely ordinary cultivation aptitude, I knew there would be some frustrating moments. If you don't want to watch, you don't have to. Please don't lower the rating (this is just my hope, not a request that you can't comment. Don't argue with me, I'm just being honest, you're the best).

The writing is quite good, not mindless, and the world hasn't collapsed yet. If the explicit content were reduced by a few hundred percent, it would be comparable to the perfectionist works of those top-tier authors! Keep up the good work, author! Please don't let it fall apart, don't abandon the story, don't leave it unfinished, and don't rush the pace too much.