The Dark Lord of Hogwarts Isn’t Very Cold

Good! I've finished reading more than a dozen chapters, and I'm going to write a long review (ah~ the last time I wrote a long review was Qin's book, this is a series about the author that fans will kill) As usual, let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The writing style is smooth, at least it is not uncomfortable to read like some novice writing, and the writing style is more daily and warm (only for the first dozen chapters, the author has not updated it yet) 2. So far, the plot is fine and the logic is flawless. The main character, Badger-in, Hermione Eagle-in, is worthy of praise. After all, everyone is used to seeing it, so writing like this can also attract readers. 3. There is an original plot. The protagonist used to be the apprentice of the Ancient One Master, a super monkey boy, and the introduction said that there may be archmages from other planes. It is speculated that there is an original plot. (Author, you will write an original one, for sure, otherwise I will write it here in vain) OK! Talk about shortcomings 1. From the front, it feels like a domineering female president and her boyfriend (maybe a bit exaggerated), but overall the character is a bit broken. I didn't expect Hermione to have such a character. Of course, character failure is a common problem in all fan fiction. I have also seen Hermione written as a vase. 2. The author's control over sweet articles and refreshing articles needs to be strengthened. In this regard, you can look for HP fans online and learn. 3. Although I don't know what the ending will be, I don't want Voldemort to be dead. No matter what, I have to do something like a plane invasion (for reference only) OK! It's all written here. No matter what the author says, he should reply to me!

I really like Hermione in this book. I originally thought Hermione was quite cute. She is not as strong, domineering and unreasonable as in other fanfics. This is the confidence that Hermione, a top student, should have. I also like Cyrus. Who doesn't like this kind of dazed and handsome boy? 😘😘😘 The writing is also very good. The plot when Cyrus played Quidditch made me super excited to watch it! ! ! All I can say is that I am very, very, very looking forward to the following plot ~ and Hermione and Cyrus together! ! ! The author, please allow me to tactfully remind you of the update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

It's so sweet, blanch it. The author is really awesome. After the change, it's better to say that Hermione after normal development is very consistent with my bold assumptions when I read it before (although there is a bit of a domineering boss here and the shadow of a tsundere little witch, but it's okay, my blood sugar is not high [laughing]), the protagonist's setting is a bit lonely and lacks love (or does not understand love) Kitty, and the kind of mentality that comes naturally after too much experience (actually I was a little uncomfortable at first, after all, many of them are the protagonists, but after thinking about it for a while, I found that it makes sense, and this kind of... Hum hum hum ha ha [sneaky laugh] don't say it) I am looking forward to the subsequent development and changes, big brother (future version) Come on!

The book is a good book. I haven't read such a good book in a long time. But the male protagonist is such a waste. He is not that kind of waste. Men and women are equal. Why did he still get married in the end... He has been suppressed. I don't understand. I won't explain. . The others are quite pretty, Of course, it's possible that the author is just an old pervert living in fantasy, hahahahahaha Big cheers for the author The more I think about it, the angrier I get. The hero has ruined an entire book. Why. Will you have to marry into the family in the end? Is it so weak? Is this a male video book? Switch to the female channel as soon as possible. The writing is very good. I hope to listen carefully and give you more opinions next time. Stop treating women as inferior to men. . At least there must be equality. . Equality between men and women is the premise. He is so angry and doesn't look like a man at all.

The single heroine is Hermione, the childhood sweetheart. The female protagonist is Ravenclaw and the male protagonist is Hufflepuff. The character design has been changed but not outrageous, the plot is sweet but not outrageous, the emotional line is good, there is a lot of sugar, I hope you don't want to be knifed (Author, you don't want us to pay in five-star installments, right? [Smile]) The author is currently in good health and has nothing to do at home, the updates are stable, the quality is OK, visual inspection should not be lame or eunuch, (Author, you don't want to open a blade factory directly at home in the future, right? [Smile] [Smile])

The future is promising. It is the sweetest HP I have ever seen. Although there are only about 20 pictures, it is too short. ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚I will use my more than 1900 hours of reading time to tell you that it is very interesting. I want the author to have cursed, (╥╯╰╥)ง<(._.)>(つд⊂)┏┛Grave┗┓...(((M -__-)m

The author's writing style can be regarded as unique that I have ever seen. Its unique cinematic feel is immersive and logical at the same time. Under its unique HP worldview, it is perfectly compatible with some Lord of the Rings and Marvel settings. The content is rich but not complicated and lengthy. While it rigorously adopts the official HP worldview, The unique originality is amazing. You may think that I am touting it because of my unique liking for this book. But as long as you read it, as long as you love and rationally like HP, I believe that this book with its profound characters, unique plot, and overwhelming sweetness will definitely be your best choice! (Come on, author! I like you so much! Remember to go to bed early! Create more chapters for us!)

Ahhhhh!!! It's simply a "divine" book, The characters are vividly created. The daily life between Hermione and little Cyrus is almost as sweet as diabetes. Although the actions are difficult to describe, you can really imagine it! But, all in all, in one sentence, more updates!!! More updates!!! Let this heartfelt dog food penetrate my stomach!!!

Amazing, very well written, okay, that's it for today's vocabulary [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] The writing is really good, it looks very smooth and I don't feel any discomfort [learned] [learned] [learned] The protagonist's strength can be strengthened a little, and don't have to ask Hermione to solve it every time [Punch] [Punch] There is also Quidditch that can help Hercule Chipachi wins once, so he may be even more excited [Hold][Hold][Hold] The most important thing is that it can be sweeter. I hope not to kill him. If possible, I hope to give Professor Quirrell a good ending [Note][Note] Finally, I hope that the fox will write better and better. I look forward to the following plots. Keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book is very interesting and has a good plot. Although there are not many people reading it now, I believe it will become popular. This should be my first five-star rating. I was too lazy to write before so I didn't comment on anything [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]