Harry Potter: I Am Nidhogg!

As a new writer, give me a five-star support. But the pace of the plot is too fast, giving people the feeling of a simple plot, and there is still more to it. Because it is an invincible and refreshing novel, I suggest the author fill in some daily life content, and the emotional line with Hermione can be more delicate. The transition from friends to lovers is too fast 🤦, and the author can polish it more. The plot of the business part is okay and quite funny. I quite like the setting of the male lead as a secondary character having fun. I hope the author will continue to work hard [plus one on the bookshelf] and try to write more (I prefer invincible articles). Come on [please update] 👍

It's so cool. The protagonist's strength before the start of school can be said to be invincible and he can take both black and white. When it gets dark 😄, the emotional line with Hermione is also very smooth. There will be no twists and misunderstandings. It's comfortable to say. If you don't have a babysitter, you won't get together with those two guys. For the sake of Lao Deng, the male protagonist just pushed the two guys as if they were children.

Okay, okay, there is no other cool novel where someone is being kicked out of the way. It's very cool. Hermione's emotional line is not too abrupt. After reading it, I feel that the author's writing style has also been slightly improved. The protagonist's ability has also been sewn into other anime. Absolute numerical values, the genius born from them, teach you to love...

Give yourself five stars. 😳

Actually, it's okay. It's a pure and refreshing article, but the pace is a bit too fast. I'm only in my early 100s and I'm in fourth grade 🤦. I hope the author can improve it in the next book 😏 👍 👍

Getting along with Hermione seems pretty awkward.

I've read more than 50 chapters, and I personally like it! It's just that some parts are very awkward to read, and I feel like there are missing words or typos, otherwise it wouldn't be fluent, but otherwise it's okay! The male protagonist is extremely powerful and looks quite comfortable!

The writing is pretty good. The other novel is Hogwarts Red Dragon. What does it have to do with you?

A very, very beautiful invincible novel, the heroine Hermione

It's good to watch, but the storyline is too tight. The description is not particularly detailed, and the emotional line with Hermione is a bit too fast. But it is indeed a cool article [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]