Hogwarts: I Just Want to Lie Flat with Hermione

Very good, very good, very good. It can be seen that the author is definitely not a newcomer. At least he has writing skills. The writing is very smooth and comfortable to read. It is also very relaxed. The interaction between the protagonist and Hermione is also very sweet. It would be nice to update more. Don't let it be unfinished.

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The writing is very delicate and the descriptions are beautiful. The author's greatest strength is love and daily life. It's very good-looking. Just use your strengths. Sweet and greasy is better. The love and interaction of teenagers are very heart-warming and more interesting than those of adults. Grow up slowly and steadily. Don't skip growing up all at once. Have more interactions, words, body movements, etc. What most people like is the interaction and love between the protagonist and Hermione, which is the highlight of this book. Don't change your style just because a few people complain, otherwise you'll end up losing the big deal, losing the watermelon and picking up the sesame seeds.

1 The author can be called a one-sided warrior. It can be seen from the title that the content of the article is undoubtedly wonderful, exciting, wonderful, sweet and enjoyable, sweet and powerful, and sweet enough to make you want to fly. As for other descriptions, it can only be said that there are foreshadowings, and benevolent people may have different opinions (there should be no boomerangs) 2 The second is to serve the sweet love between the two. As for everything else, it must make way for this part. It shouldn't be called poisonous. It can only be said to have some minor flaws. 3 Is something like a third party that some love saccharine novels always have, or plots of stomachaches for the sake of some stomachaches, none of them, so far (as for the author having a bit of a stream of consciousness feeling about his knives so far, can't it be said that it is just for the sake of it, right?) 4 Zhang Wenla's growth rate is not particularly fast, but their 11-year-old age is always a bit abrupt, but when you think about it again, it makes sense. 5. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and it feels like a stream of consciousness (actually, the gods and ghosts are a bit incomprehensible), and there are a lot of meaningful and meaningless foreshadowings. If the author is a 6-shaped warrior, the design of this article is actually very profound and exciting. Even for some veterans, it is difficult to get it right. Of course, as I said before, the author is a one-sided warrior. (Actually, the foreshadowing is very high) 6 There are very few fans who only write sweet stories about their love experiences, because there is not enough content, so they haven't finished it yet, but since they are still around 11 or 12 years old, the progress is already very long. As for whether there will be any content later, it's pretty good so far. [Laughs] 7 But the details of their love are described by the author in great detail. The author is probably not a novice. The details are full of sweetness. It's so happy. I feel like one is enough. My aunt never stops laughing. Damn it!

I'll try to see if I can rate it myself

Full marks for this sweet article. The writing is delicate and full of connotations. The beginning is simply magical. The warmth of the Granger family and the loneliness when returning to the cold and lonely life. It is well written. The emotional progress is steady and there is no twist. It's just... Personally speaking, in the magical world, although the plot is also progressing, the protagonist's magical strength seems to have made little progress because of sleepiness? Obviously we know that the HP world is full of dangers. , so if you want to protect and support Hermione, you still have to have absolute strength. The contrast of "getting serious about something for you" seems to be a kind of fun to me. Let me look further down

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back At the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Dear lords, if I hear Shinzo's nonsense again, I will pierce my ears to become deaf. However, being deaf is a sign of an emperor. You want to congratulate me on being able to proclaim the emperor. It's so obvious. Please don't be in a hurry to congratulate me. I am still a kind person and remind you all to consider what you will eat when I am gone, so it is best for me to proclaim myself emperor and you to proclaim yourself emperor too. On the cool summer night, everyone drank and sang together. During Guan Yu's song, everyone continued to play music and dance. No matter how reckless you are, I will never retire and return home.

Good-looking, a lot of daily life but not forgetting the main line, very sweet

I personally like it very much. I forgot to comment before, so I will add it now. As for the feeling that the female protagonist is dominant, it's quite common in reality. After all, some people like this [shy]