Creating Cultivation Techniques from the Start

The outline is still there, so please don't worry. Also, Xu Fu and Wu Wudi are not at the Nascent Soul stage; the protagonist is just observing from a different world. You'll find out later.

I'm a member of the Time-Space Destroyers. The Time-Space Administration has been recruiting heavily lately, leading to an overabundance of Time-Space Order attributes, so we're now recruiting. Each recruit comes with three random character abilities, guaranteed to reach at least a star level, capable of annihilating all life on the surface.

It's supposed to be a martial arts world, but Duan Yu, Xu Zhu, and Murong Fu didn't die, yet they all seem to have become immortals, teleporting and disappearing into thin air? Duan Yu can even sense the protagonist entering Dali from Tianshan! Even the Heavenly Dao intervened to stop the protagonist from killing Temujin.

The book is well-written. However, I personally dislike books that depict heartless cultivation stories where parents, siblings, masters, and fellow disciples are devoid of emotion, abandoning everyone for their own goals. Such books are truly despicable. But the author writes very well. Everyone has different reading preferences.

It's really ridiculous. I knew it was ridiculous when I saw them going to find that damn temple. Do your research on Chinese mythology and history before writing about Fei Lu. What does it have to do with that damn Buddha? Haven't you ever read Chinese mythology? If you're going to write a cultivation novel, don't include Buddhism, okay? Foundation Establishment?

First: Regarding the protagonist's transmigration, I want to say that he didn't possess someone else's body, but rather came from the womb, and it's a real world, right? Regardless of the passage of time between the two worlds, the hundreds of years of experience in The Condor Heroes are not fake, right? So, is there any specific description of family affection?

What's the point of immortality? The protagonist cultivates to become a eunuch.

As a Taoist, I especially admire Zhang Sanfeng. This is the only novel I've found that features Zhang Sanfeng as the main character, and it's so good! And the bromance between Zhang Sanfeng and the supporting character is really something! Although there is a huge gap in their cultivation levels and ages, the supporting character doesn't care. He treats Zhang Sanfeng as an equal, doesn't make him bow, and often plays chess with him. This isn't just flattery; it's pure friendship!

Shocking! I don't know when, but Feilu has suddenly seen "freeloaders." There's nothing wrong with freeloading, but please stop going around complaining. One minute you're saying there's no female lead, the next you're telling the author how to write it. Just because you freeload, you think you're right? Ridiculous!

Half-God of Wind and Cloud can travel through time and space Celestial beings cannot travel through time and space. So, a half-god is greater than a celestial being? What a load of rubbish! I see the "celestial being" you're referring to—the immortals in mythological texts, right? Mythology exaggerates their power, with celestial beings being the highest ranks.