The Witch Trials Begin with Magical Girls Hating Me

This introduction is written like— The effect of the card in my hand was negated. The monster effect was activated but was negated. The effects of the Spell Cards were also negated. The effect of a card in the graveyard was negated and banished. After finally summoning a monster, it was freed. "Don't rush off after the duel, there's still an octagon match."

Aside from the male lead being too soft and weak, it's actually not bad. The male lead is clearly set up to be unable to empathize with emotions, but he's also too emotionally fragile, which feels quite disconnected.

There are many meaningless descriptions, a lot of rambling, and a strong pretentious, artsy feel. This also reduces the density of the article, making it seem a bit padded. On the other hand, we haven't seen any character growth yet. This makes the protagonist seem like a weak character, someone who accomplishes nothing. Perhaps the author has misunderstood the "flow" genre? They need to strike a balance and avoid making the character seem too pathetic. The author hasn't written the explosive moments yet, which I think makes the subject matter quite easy to write. The author hasn't yet developed the contrast aspect. Fortunately, the updates are stable. Overall, since there aren't many Demon Judgment stories, let's look forward to the future developments. Hopefully, the author will continue writing! (◍••)

Wait, what's going on with Yuki Tsukishiro's body? It's ridiculous that no one has claimed it for a whole year! Especially since it's become an urban legend, and nobody even noticed she was hanging there?

It's clear the author has ideas and is trying to create an interesting protagonist. However, one thing is certain: the author's understanding of the protagonist differs from the reader's. Many plot points that seem reasonable to the author are simply "What the hell is this?" To the reader. So next time you do something, lay the groundwork more. Don't just jump right in and say something like, "Just tell the whole family you're doing well," like that kind of ridiculous move.

The author seems to have good writing skills, but the portrayal of the protagonist being disliked feels a bit overdone. The protagonist appears outwardly human but is inwardly troubled; for example, he cares about her but acts indifferent. When someone gives him a piece of fruit, he secretly takes a bite and throws it away (is this even meaningful?). He tells Coco, whose family seems to have perished, that he just needs to survive (seriously, does he have any emotional intelligence? Is he a hypocrite?). A normal person would say, "Your family wants you to survive."

Am I just imagining things? The beginning feels a bit like an apocalyptic prophecy.

Upon seeing this book, I was awestruck; it felt as if I were sitting in a chair witnessing an atomic bomb explosion. I'd give it a 9 out of 10. The writing is very good, and the protagonist might be a bit of a superhuman, but I think that's a good thing. #(Laughs)

The protagonist was suspected of being cursed by someone from the very beginning.

Having skimmed through the first eight chapters, I'd like to offer my honest opinion. The author has done an excellent job of developing the characters, starting with the Kurobe sisters and their past events, particularly the indirect connection between Takashi's background and the Nikaido family. Then there's his relationship with Coco and Arisa, all explained clearly. As for why people dislike Takashi, I could summarize it in one sentence: "We are the real humans." On a whim, I tried to understand why Takashi's mindset became what it is. Multiple family influences, and a similar environment in his past life, have created a severe social disconnect for him. He's completely unable to utter a literal, appropriate phrase for the situation when interacting with others. I'm very curious: what happened to this pseudo-human to become the way he is now? Or is it that in your outline, as the chapters progress, you will gradually reveal the past of Lao Chong, who has become this hypocrite?