Dragon Raja: How I Picked Up a Queen of the Underworld

Summary of the turmoil in Chapters 59 and 60 of Volume 2 of this book Promise me, this is definitely the best summary of this whole situation you'll see in the comments section. Original content: On the day of freedom, Susie enters as a third party, sabotaging the final duel between Lu Chukai and his two companions with a sneak attack, resulting in zero mistakes for Lu Mingfei's side. Nono unexpectedly wins. Points of dissatisfaction among readers 1️⃣ Lu Ming, who is not a combatant, suffers a setback. Before modification Lu Mingfei lost after being knocked unconscious by three 12.7Mm sniper rifle bullets from Frigga. After modification Lu Mingfei was knocked back from his dragon bone state by three 12.7Mm sniper rifle bullets fired by Frigga. In an instant, he killed Susie with his pistol, and then fell into a deep sleep after the high-concentration Frigga "nuclear bomb" exploded. Think: ① The invincible Lu Mingfei, whom the reader had projected onto him, fell down by being shot in the back. Given Lu's strength, it should have been a crushing victory, but he was eliminated in this way, which made the reader feel frustrated. ② This also sparked discussion among readers about Jiang Nan's "glass cannon" combat power—why was Lao Lu, in his dragon-bone state, repelled by a sniper rifle? The author explained that Frigga's bullets were specialized bullets designed to interfere with dragons, which is logically reasonable. However, it would have been much more visually appealing if he had been repelled by a machine gun. Of course, the original setting of Lao Lu's dragon-bone state in Jiang Nan's work is also quite confusing; even Jiang Nan himself doesn't understand his own combat power. It is suggested that the author strengthen Lao Lu. 2️⃣ Susie's character is problematic. Her motive for shooting in the back is insufficient. Before modification Susie shoots from behind, Nono wins. After modification Susie was shot in the back but was killed by Lu Mingfei in retaliation; Ling defeated Nono and won. Think ①As a newcomer to Kassel, she had no reason to disrupt the duel between the three giants of Kassel. But she did, which violated the original character of Susie as gentle and delicate, yet strong for the one she loved. ② As a character appearing for the first time in the story, her plot weight is insufficient, making her unsuitable as someone who takes the initiative. Replacing her with Zero or someone from the student council would be more appropriate, because then everyone would know that the author is using the "one-day freedom of choice" to bring this character and Old Ji closer to their romantic relationship. ③ In contrast to the original novel, Lao Lu's sniping was because he thought it was a real-life game and Nono was dead; this plot point is inappropriate. 3️⃣ After the patch to Chapter 60, Lu Mingfei's "pressure" and Su Qian's nodding made readers feel that Lu Mingfei, compared to the original novel's Kai Chu, was a bit of a sore loser. Before the modification Susie and Lu made a bet, and Lu won, receiving a day of freedom as a reward. Susie, true to her word, became a Lionheart Society maid, cleaning Norton Mansion for a year. After the revision, Since it was a zero-win situation, there was no reward. Susie felt guilty for shooting him in the back and wanted to join the Lionheart Society to help. After their duel, the punishment was as described above. Think ①To be honest, I think it's more of a joke between Lu and Nuo than pressure. Regarding Ketsu's magnanimity in the original story, I don't think it's necessarily true. Ketsu seemed to be under a lot of pressure when he invited Lu to the banquet. However, if you really want to find fault, you can definitely pinpoint some minor flaws. ②The author wrote this chapter this way because Lu Mingfei lost before the revision, and wanted to compensate Lu Mingfei in the patch chapter while also punishing Su Xi to make the readers feel better. However, it seems there's been another bug. Summarize The author's intention was to achieve an ending where Nono is persecuted, and also to pay homage to the original work. However, the author's approach of shooting the arrow first and then drawing the target led to a plot hole.

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Giant tortoises are in the area # (sweat)

I finished it in one day. I've never read Dragon Raja before, but I feel that the authors of Dragon Raja all have a very unique writing style.

If you're going to use stream-of-consciousness metaphors or something, you'd better have corresponding real-world context to support it. Jiang Nan's writing style is based on the environment and audience; many readers are also reading physical copies, so they can directly anticipate the following events. The earlier mystical or rambling passages are followed by responses or plot developments, making for a better reading experience. But if you lay such a huge foreshadowing here, whether it will be resolved later is another question, and it just feels like a waste of time.

Waiting for a Shennong (a legendary Chinese figure) #(starry-eyed)

Why can I write about Dragon Raja on Cat Station again? I remember it wasn't allowed before. #(Shut up)

Could we have a single female lead, Genjiro? Other female leads could be paired with different male supporting characters, like Chu Zihan and Lao Tang, Xia Mi and Caesar, Erii and Herzog.

I just saw 5960 chapters. It's clear the author didn't think things through before writing these two. Looking at the number of chapters posted after these two, it's been halved. It seems many readers felt these two chapters had major problems. But I still feel the revised version is strange; I don't understand the author's thinking. Leaving these two chapters with minimal plot changes implies a 50% reduction in new readers? Let's look at it another way: are there any praiseworthy aspects to these two chapters? Is it the character development or the impact on the plot?

The author doesn't really need to update so excessively just to fill the bounty. To be honest, the long chapters these past two days have been a bit weak. Spreading the bounty word count over two months to make up for it wouldn't be a problem. Quality is the key! Hi~ o(*￣▽￣*)ブ