Girl Bands, If You Don't Break Up, How Am I Supposed to Make Money?

Author, you've made the combat power so high! In a slice-of-life anime, the protagonist's abilities are too overpowered. How are you going to write the story later?

Oh my god, my chapter got rejected! Why are they targeting me like this? #(Angry)

To be honest, the pacing is a bit off. There shouldn't be any leverage in the first place. The female lead isn't even fully introduced yet and she's already financially independent and invincible? How are they going to write the rest of the story? #(Sweat)

The protagonist is a beast! He doesn't treat female characters like human beings at all; they're all just playthings and sources of amusement. Does he have to be so perverted? If you want pure love, just add some charm and sticky Dio; there's no need to keep adding that power. What's the point of power? In a society governed by law, a little mind control makes you the king of the world. Enough power is enough.

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If you update one chapter every day, I think this novel has too many female characters, resulting in too little screen time for each one. It's either ccb or oh goo, which delays the plot and makes it a bit tedious to read. But if you update ten chapters every day, all these problems will disappear. On the contrary, I will be moved by your dedication to collecting the entire encyclopedia and will vote for you with my monthly ticket. #(Funny) (copied from someone else)

To be honest, a female lead who's an alcoholic is a bit much. She's addicted to alcohol, constantly vomiting. It looks okay in the anime, but if you actually got close, you'd smell the alcohol...

I implore the author to do some research before writing about things they don't understand, or at least ask someone. Seeing 10 million yen is truly baffling, and the subsequent AGI content is even more nonsensical. 10 Million yen is an exaggeration for a computer, but when it comes to deploying AGI, you could throw 10 million yen into it and not even see a ripple. I don't understand why they had to include this content; it completely ruined the reading experience.