Collapse Dual Transmigration: Bringing Xilian to Honkai Impact 3rd

The protagonist gives me the feeling of someone from the old Zhong family. When poor, he cultivates his own virtue; when successful, he seeks to conquer the world. He has morality, but can also lack it. He'd rather let others suffer than waste his own life. He has the world in his heart, but also knows his own limitations. He's protective of his own. He's reasonable. It's almost as if he thinks, "I study to communicate with people who aren't stupid. I practice martial arts to reduce the number of idiots."

Artistic nerd syndrome...

Can't they write savior-type stories? Every time it's the same old incompetent or dependent-on-himself trope, so padded out. Now I don't even feel the point of opening the book. Are savior-type wish-fulfillment stories really unacceptable? 🧐

So artsy? I came to see you act like a madman and beat up the whole world! Not to watch you ramble on and act like a nice guy! So what if he killed? Otto was ruthless and decisive, yet he had so many die-hard fans. Even the protagonist, the savior, is hostile to him. He's just a clown, too clownish to watch.

I feel like you're torturing people with so much filler. Do you really need to pad the parts so much? You might as well use AI to fill the truly challenging parts with emotional and plot elements that require human thought. Wouldn't it be better if you wrote those by hand? People are too lazy to read the torturing parts anyway.

Is this really a madman who goes off on his hunting ways? The more I look at him, the more he seems like a lunatic heading towards destruction, deviating from the path of hunting.

The male protagonist's personality is that of a seafaring knight-errant. He likes to fight violence with violence, but he's far more extreme than a typical seafaring knight-errant. A seafaring knight-errant's motto is revenge: "I'll kill you." The male protagonist's motto is: "I'll torture you; you don't deserve to die quickly." Even if you are an ordinary person, if you make me unhappy, I will torture you. I guess I'm just a born maverick, probably belonging to the chaotic good camp. I only do what I want, without considering the consequences; whoever makes me unhappy is wrong. Only I am right.

Well, the average person is too focused on Mei. Even if Cocolia keeps creating a buzz, it's impossible for her to influence millions of people. Most people are probably just enjoying the drama, like watching a cat fight, rather than genuinely harboring malice.

Not bad. It's already quite good. The author's works I've read most comprehensively are *Ordinary Person's Start*, *Regret Simulator*, and *Starting with Raiden Mei*. Aside from the overly sentimental parts, the character portrayals and handling of these three are commendable. While the early chapters were a bit drawn out, especially the part about fighting Cocolia, I mainly disliked Raiden Mei's affected mannerisms. However, it improved significantly after the books were released. Kevin's reasonable anger towards Sue was also expressed. I haven't read further, but I still hope Sue gets a happy ending. Very good, very impressive. Keep it up!

The preceding text was written in such a literary style!