Rebuilding Ursus, Starting by Replacing Koschei

Chapter 16: Are you a giant beast or a time traveler? You are familiar with the plot, and in order to prevent Talulah from becoming the same as in the original timeline, you decide to kill the Black Serpent, transform into its form, and raise Talulah.

After reading it once, there were too many flaws in the early stages. Although the protagonist will use his true identity later, many readers will abandon the book before they see that point (and the protagonist doesn't really know how to use his powers, so there's no need for him to wear the Black Snake skin and play around with small animals; it's too degrading). #(Blue)#(Blue)#(Blue)

Farmer (not Shennong) The author's work is roughly at the level of a serious original novel by Tomato. The content is okay, not particularly amazing, but readable. Keep up the good work, author. (Also, Tomato has good books and readable works. Don't be fooled by Tomato's fanfiction or mindless writing. Using Tomato to describe the author's level is not malicious, just to find a reference point. Unfortunately, I have only read Tomato, Hedgehog Cat, and Polish Bread. I feel that the atmosphere of Flying Land Singularity and Jin General is not very good, so I have not used it.)

Despite being a behemoth-level combatant, his performance was lackluster.

Well, to be honest, this book suffers from the same problem it had several years ago: the protagonist always seems hesitant and timid in the early stages. At least, you managed to write it that way. It's just that this book isn't very popular, with only scattered complaints in some online forums. Otherwise, I bet the comments section would have been flooded with negative feedback by now. #(Sweat)

Their development skills are too laid-back; they don't seem like people from a world without magic at all. If an Earthling were to transmigrate to a supernatural world, which one wouldn't want to be able to fly, teleport, and become omnipotent? The protagonist is inherently very strong, but he's unwilling to use his brain, only practicing when the situation becomes unbearable. He'll regret it when faced with problems he can't solve. The first thing to do when acquiring extraordinary abilities is to test the limits of those abilities. Understanding the limits of your own abilities is crucial to knowing whether you can solve problems when they arise. It can be solved—my super intelligence tells me it's time to use my super power. If you can't solve it, try other solutions instead of waiting to die.

There's really no need to have such a big problem with Yan. If you keep harping on every little thing about a country, then no country will be good. Besides, among all the countries in Terra, Yan is already considered relatively human-like, except for the fact that it produced someone like Wei Yanwu.

It's too laid-back. The protagonist is like a typical college student who doesn't browse online forums or social media; he reacts to everything like an ordinary person. And there's been absolutely no change in over a hundred chapters. He barely develops his own power and never bothers to think about the plot details of the Ark. His reaction when the elves worshipped him was just ridiculous. Are you even a giant beast? Don't you have any awareness of your own identity? #(Angry)

I've been following the story up to the Great Yan arc, but I'm really starting to lose interest. I'll wait until after chapter 40. Reading the Great Yan chapters is making my blood pressure and general discomfort rise with each chapter.

I have to complain about the latest chapter. Colombia is a parliamentary system where almost all national decisions are controlled by AI birds. If we're talking about comparisons, AI birds have even more concentrated power than President Roosevelt in reality. Apart from the name, what substantial manifestation does this have with a parliamentary system? Or what does Colombia's development have to do with a parliamentary system?