I, the True Sword Art Online Player, Have Them Fighting to Marry Me!

Is this your second book? Sorry, I have a thing for your first book.

Endless Shennong appears! (Haha)

Author, could you please just use some kind of deus ex machina or something, so that no one else can touch the players' real bodies? It feels like spending so much time in the virtual world while leaving their real bodies in the hospital is completely unsettling.

I have to rant after reading chapter 25. Even with a 50% experience buff and initial money to buy equipment, the protagonist is still more than three days behind the protagonist in progress. Isn't that a bit outrageous? Or at least make it clear that the experience gained from fighting monsters above your level is doubled. Otherwise, where will these beta testers find monsters that give high experience but are weak, allowing them to surpass the protagonist who's got a cheat code? I can understand suppressing combat power, but at least make the plot more reasonable! #(Black line)

You have to have either the thrill of fighting monsters or the thrill of the female lead. Among the female leads currently being written about, only Anon and Asuna interest me. In the previous story, the protagonist was always corrupted by fate in order to establish a connection with the female lead. This is Kasumigaoka. The price for sharing half of the male lead's experience to level up is simply to be his assistant, and he is also allowed to have plenty of free time. The latest chapter says they'll increase the interaction with the female lead; hopefully, there will be less of that kind of plot. The author of the other novel, "Electric Stick," ruined the male lead's character just to develop Xiangzi's storyline; he wrote him like a dog.

Can Kirito be made into a female character? I want to see the main character criticize Kiriko.

Yukino's storyline is giving me a headache. Aine's writing is pretty good, so why waste so much time on Yukino, and it's not even effective?

Author, if you don't criticize Haruno soon, I'm going to criticize you. Like that saying goes, this is no joke. It's so easy to make a sound, but look at what you wrote! If it were just playing a game, a trial could be held later, but this is a matter of life and death. Are you just going to let Yang Nai get away with it like this? Furthermore, if you're writing crossover anime, and there are so many good ones, why are you fixated on just one Yang Nai? There's even a logical flaw here. When playing games normally, players should be aware of version changes, let alone risk their lives. As a result, a bunch of people acted with Yang Nai without any investigation or questioning, which I could tolerate. But at least they should have criticized it, right? And they just gave up like that? If they won't let the main character criticize it, then at least let someone else do it. The character you created is truly detestable. Unless you intended her to be a clown, I can't understand why you would portray her this way.

It's too bland. The protagonist's leveling up and stat allocation is supposed to be satisfying, but it's so slow and tedious. Plus, the physical transmigration aspect leaves no room for personal control; it completely follows the game's mechanics. The biggest highlight in the early game is the initial boss tier. A group of people are having a strategy discussion, and halfway through, they start arguing, only to suddenly announce in the public chat that the boss has been defeated – this exciting moment is completely ruined. Ultimately, it just feels like you're following the story.

To be honest, in this kind of world, Rikka, Shiina Mashiro, and Megumin are all easier to write than the Yukinoshita sisters, so why pick two such difficult characters?