What's Wrong with Getting Lost in Fantasy?

The comments and discussions seem to have gone a bit off-topic. Answering some questions that I am most concerned about 1. How can the protagonist, with such weak abilities, fight against Kyubey? Should we not resist if the intruders are very powerful? An infinite time loop isn't necessarily a safe option, but you can see it as the protagonist's only means of struggle. 2. Why was the protagonist's cheat ability so weak at the beginning? The original plan wasn't to develop superpowers overnight. Instead, it was about the girls finding hope in near-impossible situations, striving to improve themselves, and cultivating their emotions and strength. Doesn't that sound incredibly cool? 3. Will the protagonist's abilities grow? Yes, it will continue to grow and evolve as the cycle continues. His wishes, the witch, and the revelation of his true nature will all gradually enhance his abilities. However, it won't be a story where the protagonist single-handedly saves the day; it's a story about everyone working together.

I suddenly thought of a perfect title for the final chapter of this book: how about "The End of Reincarnation"? #(Laughs)

That's enough. What's wrong with Infinite Tsukuyomi?

Why does the protagonist's name sound like a guy's? Who added the orange tag?

I haven't watched much yet. Is it a pure romance or a harem? #(Funny)

The most hidden and crazy fantasy of Chinese men: Someone loves them #(laughs). Looking at it this way, Shuang Ge's personality is pretty good. Oh no, I want to see the Joker, I want some laughs! Someone should write a book about a certain "Sayaka the Fool" who persecuted his fans—you know, the kind who's always shouting about Sayaka's idiot anniversary this year—who actually went to the Madoka Magica world and met the real Sayaka. Oh no! This tomboyish, easygoing guy is so comfortable to be around, and he's head and shoulders with you! All that persecution turned into a boomerang, and he ended up as the Joker, going through a wife-chasing-after-the-cremation ordeal! #(Funny)

I want the protagonist's abilities too!!! To be able to see the wife of my fantasies in real life. To freely modify everything in front of you, whether it's watching Ultraman, Super Soldier, or playing Stellaris, wouldn't that be incredibly awesome? This is a virtual game world where you can even insert yourself into anime. You can change the plot if you don't like it, even though it's just in your mind, it truly feels like you're actually there. I'd be willing to live with this disease for the rest of my life! #(Cute)

Of all the Madoka Magica fanfiction I've read, this is undoubtedly my favorite. Perhaps the writing style and plot aren't the most outstanding, but it's the most reassuring and comfortable to read. Unfortunately, the final CCB segment was too short.

The author has the skill, but it seems to get carried away as it progresses; I only got to volume 2 before the plot stalled. The storyline feels like a sequel, with the main plot barely touched upon. It's not that there was no effort put into advancing the story, but rather a lack of effort in that area. The author devotes a lot of space to describing the relationships between girls, and between the protagonist and a girl, but there's no detailed explanation of what will happen in the future or why. Things like building websites and creating games are treated like routine tasks. I don't know if the protagonist does anything else later, but if all he does is give Nagisa the fusion ability, then no matter what his classmates say about him being a "psychic god" or "a promising young man," or even if many people envy his ability, I'll still see him as just another one of those guys who's "daydreaming." #(Sad)

To be fair, judging from the beginning of the rebellious tale, Hitomi's character, while a bit scheming, still retains a girlish heart. Her feelings towards Kamijou are somewhat similar to Sora's love-struck nature, though not as rational and self-serving as in the second volume. Of course, she's definitely more calculating than Madoka and Sayaka. I feel the author is very talented; most of the plot developments, settings, and character designs derived from the original story are very reasonable, well-founded, and convincing. It's the most "reasonable" Madoka fanfic I've read so far. However, I feel there's a lack of psychological and emotional descriptions for the characters, especially the protagonist, making her seem overly rational. Even the moments when the protagonist genuinely feels moved are described through Madoka and Homura's perspectives, making the protagonist feel less alive and lacking a sense of "humanity." Other than that, there aren't many problems.