Starting with a Defeated Female Knight

The world's civilization is a bit weak; even these intermittent natural disasters that indiscriminately strike at everyone can't produce a powerful centralized government. #(Sweat)

This reminds me a bit of a novel I read on BlueP about a royal uncle... You've been missing for so long, did you get lost on the internet?

I've read 10 chapters, and there's still no sex scene.

#(Goodbye)😦 Our author is getting more and more out of touch with the times. Lately, they've become obsessed with reading Korean web novels. The authors there generally use AI to create models of the main characters, especially those writing erotica-themed novels; they even use AI to create scene models directly.

Here's a suggestion: for magicians, the most precious thing isn't industrialization, but mathematics. Mathematics is universally applicable in any world, and the development of modern mathematics is certainly more advanced than what's written in books. For a researcher, mathematics is the foundation of everything.

Okay, at least they didn't force it. The fact that they had the patience to finish the book quickly shows the author has a conscience. There are plenty of websites like this that shut down without a word or reason.

The plot has been getting increasingly bizarre lately. It felt like this trend started after the Empire arc ended. There's less character development and more new settings, and the combat power keeps increasing. The Ancient Gods, who were decent at the beginning, went from being bosses to high-level elite monsters when fighting the Gray Mist in the Empire arc, and they were instantly killed without leaving any impression. Then the Pseudo-Human arc was even worse, with the perspective jumping around aimlessly, either explaining the setting or building infrastructure (which wasn't very long). Then, within a dozen chapters, a bunch of new settings appeared, like the real universe and the Emperor, and then the Pseudo-Human arc was left unattended. I didn't even remember many of the characters. A bunch of characters disappeared for over ten chapters, the grand narrative wasn't done well, and the character development was lackluster. What exactly is the author trying to achieve?

Outline collapse + declining writing ability + disrupted sleep schedule + family health issues Well, at least there's an ending, and our valuables didn't get away or get lost. Next time, make the outline more detailed; don't let it fall apart halfway through writing again. Fortunately, most of the books that collapsed were lighthearted, mainly featuring memes and witty remarks. Note #(Laughing and crying) If you were to write a serious plot and then completely fall apart at the end, I can't even imagine how bad your reputation would be. #(Laughing and crying)

As expected, it's another classic case of mid-stage development, the world-building goes haywire, the main plot is pushed forward aggressively, and then the ending is a mess. The three books, Tokyo Demon Slayer, Commander, and Trainer, have a combined four or five million words, and yet this is still the same problem? Only Trainer, because its world-building is larger than that of regular horse racing novels, but not as large as others, managed to finish the story after its hiatus.

This novel, while disguised as a farming story, has its core selling point being its explicit content. Readers who enjoy farming fiction might be disappointed, but those looking for something more explicit might find it worthwhile. The pseudo-human episode is not very good. The characters have too little interaction and are all just templates like "oh ho". As a vegetarian dish, it lacks emotional interaction and character characteristics. As a meat dish, it lacks oil and flavor and is bland. Moreover, it's a bit awkward to pretend to be innocent after things have been done so badly.