Refining the Way to Immortality

The author's last book, Journey to the West, was indeed very good. Regardless of the level of all aspects, it can be regarded as the best among many fanfics. Then I looked at it and found that the author has not updated it. At that time, I thought something happened to the author. Later, when I saw that the book was updated, I thought the author would continue writing. After all, there were many holes to be filled in at the end of the book, and there were still many stories to write. I really liked the author's last book. I didn't expect that it would be unfinished in the end. It was really great. It's a pity, because the last book was "Journey to the West", so I stopped writing it before I finished it. Later, I read a lot of other novels, and they really didn't have the flavor of the author's previous article. Although there are a lot of words, it overall gives people a feeling similar to "Journey to the West". I think it is the best one among the "Journey to the West" fanfiction. .

Why are you writing about these messy intrigues? You play tricks every day and you are a goddamn god! Moreover, your description of a thousand-year-old family does not have any of the rules and character that a wealthy family should have!

The author's writing of this book is so bad. The opening chapter is an old-fashioned way of pretending to be a slap in the face. I think the author's Journey to the West fan book is pretty good. Why has the level of this book dropped so seriously? I was about to quit after reading the first few chapters, but I clicked on the author's homepage and suddenly saw the Journey to the West fanfic. After thinking about it, I clicked the book into my favorites, and then read a few more chapters. I found the shortcomings of the author's book. The first obvious point is that The opening chapter is a slap in the face with the same old routine. To be honest, as readers, we are all a little tired of aesthetics. The second point is that the name Zhou Qing is a bit alien. We clearly know that the Buddha is the original Tao and there is this protagonist, so why do we have to choose a person with the same name? The third point is that when I read the first few chapters, I wrote about the rules of my own family, and then what other people did, but you didn't describe in detail at all the past life and the worldview of this book. All in all, the author hastened to give this book a thumbs up, and finally gave it a five-star rating.

I was poisoned several times in the first chapter! How old is the author? ! Each slave controls the elixir and manipulates the future, and also writes that the family rules are strict? !

It's a useless slap in the face, with a rating of 8.0. I don't know who gave it the positive reviews. It's so damning. Have you never read fantasy novels? Some people like this kind of music

There are a lot of inexplicably fancy words, but they really don't convey any specific information. Very tired to watch.

Confusing logic, is the protagonist a reborn person or a time traveler? I'm confused. The first sentence was fluent, but the second sentence jumped out and made me confused. What was it written? The description of the environment was too much, and the hydrology was suspicious.

What age have you been, and you still write useless things that slap you in the face? This is just fun. Look at the reviews and see how good others say, but the result is a piece of shit.

Hey, good guy, this supporting character really has no brains at all. The protagonist is still a person who has been in the officialdom in his previous life. He has brains, but not much, emm, let's start.

What is this written about? The protagonist's troubles in the early stage were basically caused by the Shinichi Sect. Later, the protagonist found out that his talent was very good, and the protagonist ran to the Shinichi Sect like crazy. What's the point of joining the bottom sect? Can a normal person write this by giving the protagonist so many tests? It's like I am ranked first in the national college entrance examination. You, a first-class and bottom university, still give me a lot of tests. I have to pass the exam before I can go to your university. I, Qingbei University, can go to any kind of school, but I still need to join your rubbish sect.