To Cultivate Immortality, One Must Have Good Luck

It doesn't matter about the plot, but the author writes that there really isn't a normal, likeable woman in the story. Every one of them comes out with a two-dimensional style, and there is no equivalent in reality! Let me tell you, novels and anime are different. If you write based on anime girls, you will poison a lot of readers! For example, if the male protagonist in an anime has a younger sister, they are usually arrogant, unreasonable, and unreasonable. However, people who watch anime still like to have this kind of younger sister. Why? Because anime has pictures and images. Even if the anime girl puts her hands on her hips and yells, but has a cute face and Q-version special effects, everyone will like it. But if you write it like this in a novel, it will be completely different. People don't see the cute image, they just see the unreasonable and unreasonable character. Can they like it? In novels, it's usually a big deal if the male protagonist has a sister. Why, because many authors write their sisters according to anime! I automatically imagined the cute image of an anime girl in my mind, thinking that everyone would be able to imagine it if I wrote it down, without any regard for other people's feelings when reading the text! Even in Yingying's novel, he wrote like that and commented that his sister was the theme of the novel. In the end, she was so criticized that Fangyuan didn't appear much in the later period. This is the problem. People only read the text and don't think that kind of women are cute. They only find them annoying and ignorant! It's completely different from anime! The two girls I have seen so far are very strange, but after watching the anime, I know that they are two very typical anime girls. When I watched it, I still couldn't stand it and didn't like it! Since you are a cultivator, why don't you write about women with some oriental themes? The appearance of this second dimension is as uncomfortable as a piece of pizza appearing in a plate of dumplings. It is best to focus on the plot and write less about two-dimensional girls! !

This is a rare novel about cultivating immortality. It is worth subscribing to and reading slowly. The fighting sessions are very detailed and exciting, and the inherited and ice-type skills are rare. It's just that the training is too slow. I have just practiced the first big realm in Chapter 200, but the protagonist's skills can already change the world. If I don't write it well later, it will collapse. However, the training system of this book is different and I can still understand it.

It's another book that's overwhelming, with more than 200 chapters and it's still at its first level! Everyone regards themselves as great masters, and each book aims to write tens of millions of words.

How can I put it, the first few dozen chapters were fine, but when it came to the sect trial, the poison started. I didn't realize how powerful the leader of the Cangwu sect was at all. He blew the whistle first, but the elementary school students operated it and poisoned the whole sect. If you want to make up the words, you might as well add some ellipses. It's so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore.

Five-star praise, very beautiful, no bragging! ! !

Come on! Very well written. I hope it will be a long story.

As a protagonist who has a problem, you have been in more than 200 chapters and are still being suppressed and beaten by the young people from Novice Village. What a stain on you.

He talks about being cautious and careful, but in the end, the most dangerous place around is the protagonist. A novel about being stubborn and frivolous is definitely not good. The introduction at the beginning is quite good, they beat them, the protagonist silently gathers his luck and opportunities, and then hides his cultivation. On the surface, he is similar to everyone else, but in fact, the protagonist is one step higher than them. How could it be overturned in such a long paragraph? In the end, the protagonist's plug-in was written to guide the protagonist to wander around and go where there is danger. The protagonist's sect is also afraid that the protagonist will not die. Can't you just be a little bit? Everyone knows that you are talented and know that you can skip levels. If I am an enemy of the sect or an enemy, if you don't die within 5 chapters, you will be considered powerful.

I remembered you. I was chasing that book before and sent it directly after I came back from school one day

Just this Zhou Tingyu can persuade a lot of people to stop, but you can't stand a slut and act coquettishly, which will affect your perception.