Linyuan Asked

The author's writing style and plot are all good, but the results are far inferior to the previous one. The biggest problem is that it is too unfriendly to the mainstream readers of cultivating immortals. In modern society, young people don't even have children, don't get married, don't take out loans to buy houses, and spend most of the money they earn on themselves. As a result, the protagonist is such a reincarnated overhaul with a good inheritance and excellent livelihood. You let him stay in a family that does not even have a spiritual lineage. He also has to carry a large family that cannot be called a family to carry forward the burden. He has not yet developed in the early stage, and he will be involved in a family power struggle? I don't know what other readers think. Anyway, I'm disgusted. The protagonist has so many means, why not become a casual cultivator? Not to mention the freedom, he can still survive and develop in the early stage. Just after breaking through to the first level of Qi refining, this family went bankrupt. The protagonist is reincarnated and rebuilt. Did he have such deep feelings for this family when he first came here? It's like the whole family is the protagonist's responsibility, leading them to grow and develop slowly, and facing many dangers and enemies whose strength is completely mismatched. Anyway, I think it is very poisonous. If the author changes the protagonist to a casual cultivator or joins the sect later, the results will be much better than the current results. It is no longer popular for refugees to cultivate immortality. What everyone likes to read is the kind of family stories that can complement each other, not the kind that cannot even protect the early development. The entire force basically relies on the protagonist to develop, which is too tiring for today's young readers. What everyone likes is that each one takes charge of his own affairs. Even the story about force development requires the protagonist to go through the development period and become powerful and powerful. Instead of this kind of inherited skills, there is no shortage of everything, but inexplicably stays in the family to develop.

The data is written in vain. The protagonist practices quickly and has all kinds of blessings and elixirs that are the best. In the late stage of foundation building, the Taoist monks are still in the early stage, and the high-grade elixir they refine is only enough for the protagonist. The protagonist worked hard to cultivate the elixir successfully, and the Taoist monks immediately thought that it would be a perfect foundation for many years. Damn it, you can still bless their cultivation by forming elixirs! Then there is Ye Yingxu, who only broke through the foundation building when you formed the elixir. It took more than 50 years to complete the foundation building, and then formed the top-notch nine-marked golden elixir. It took you nearly 200 years to get from the early stage of foundation building to perfection with all kinds of plug-in blessings, magical power blessings, talent blessings, and the best elixir blessings. I don't even look at what I wrote. The same applies to pets. Monsters can cultivate faster than humans and their life spans are many times that of humans. You have already said that some elixirs are limited and can only be used by yourself. If others do not take the medicine for a long time, it will be faster than your cultivation.

The protagonist is a broom star, and every time he breaks through a big realm, he will kill some tribesmen. It's really unlucky to be a member of your tribe! Can't we go somewhere else to break through?

Since it is a battle between great avenues, why not ask someone with a high level to tell the truth? Every time it is a fight between the same level, and the protagonist has a lot of friends, and the enemy sect has no friends. If the level is higher, there is more time, and there are fewer friends. If you just can't beat it, why don't you spend more resources to hire more foreign aid? Or form a Tundao Alliance. When the time comes, more than 20 people can fight a newly rising person together. You can also ask someone with a higher level to take it directly. Even if you don't take action, you can block the protagonist's foreign aid. Can't you just take it directly?

There is too much nonsense, almost all of it is inner drama, especially in the first three chapters, the words about water properties improving recovery ability appear no less than five times.

I feel like this book should be called: I use hydrology to prove the great god. It is difficult to describe the feeling of family members sharing weal and woe and supporting each other in a family story. In addition, the protagonist enters the scene as an extraterrestrial demon who invades the family. As a result, his feelings for the family are inexplicable. It would be better to write an original protagonist who accidentally absorbs the consciousness of the remnant soul.

After reading thirty chapters, I can't help but be poisoned. A small Qi refining family can produce less than one low-grade spiritual stone in a year. A late-stage Qi refining monk is a major Qi refining practitioner, and he has the foundation to suppress a clan! ! That's all. I'll just assume that what you wrote is a beggar's version of cultivating an immortal. It turns out that the protagonist traveled back in time and lived peacefully as a mortal for fifteen years. However, less than a month after starting to practice, bullshit happened one after another. Crisis of genocide came one after another. The protagonist has no strength and can only live on soft food and count on a female cultivator from another tribe to help. This is okay, and the soft rice trend is not unacceptable. The problem is that the protagonist met this female nun while walking around in the market. And this female nun, even with the protagonist's experience of hundreds of years in the previous life, can be regarded as a rare stunning woman in the world. However, this stunning woman almost fell in love with the protagonist at first sight, and the protagonist ignored him. She rushed to help him again and again, feeding the protagonist hand-in-hand with the soft rice, and he was so stupid! It's simply baffling! !

What the hell, this is the first time I have seen someone making elixirs like this. The whole process is just a medicine, and dozens or hundreds of pills are produced. A spiritual healer can be praised as a god. His craftsmanship is even better than his realm.

I have read more than a thousand chapters of "Evergreen" and the main character has been raised since he came to the Earthly Immortal. I didn't expect it to be finished now.

Can the author correct his mistakes? There are a ridiculous number of typos, various sentences are not fluent, and people's names are often written incorrectly. There are problems everywhere. I almost thought I was reading a pirated book. I couldn't bear it anymore and couldn't bear to vomit. Can we change it to have more inspections? Can we change it to have more inspections? Can we change it to have more inspections? Say important things three times!