Born to Be Immortal

I don't know what kind of time traveler the author is writing about. He is a noob in terms of his character. He needs his uncle to remind him of the shortcomings of killing people for treasures and taking large amounts of elixirs. For such a stupid person, what kind of time traveler can you write about? Can't we just write about the indigenous people? And I didn't even see the so-called golden finger that hard work will reward you. There is a huge difference between the introduction and the book. Breaking through the third level and the fourth level of Qi training are all mentioned in one stroke, which is simply baffling.

Why does the sect like to accept teenagers into the sect? It was just for training and brainwashing from an early age. I thought that the protagonist had a foundation of past life experience and would not be brainwashed. However, the protagonist was still brainwashed after the foundation was established. All day long, one sect was longer than the other, and he wanted to be beaten to death by the sect. I felt puzzled. You have made so many contributions, but you never owe the sect anything. Why do you do so much trouble all day long? What else are you saying about transforming the inner demon into a baby, are you kidding me? I feel that the author should have avoided this kind of thing from happening when he wrote that paragraph. Even if the protagonist is a native, he should not be so selfless to the sect. You and the sect are just exchanges, not working hard or fighting for him. I have read Chapter 195. I think this book has written more than 200 chapters in total. I hope the author can revamp the plot in the future.

I don't know what I'm writing about, and the author doesn't even read it himself? The flying swords are divided into different categories in the front, but not in the back? The first paragraph is about Feiyue Lake, and the next paragraph becomes Biyue Lake? In the previous chapter, it was written that no land reclamation order had been issued for hundreds of years, but in the next chapter, the 180-year-old ancestor of the Chen family participated in it twice? ? ? [Emot=default,01/] Although he is an old author, the details are too poor. There is also a poisonous point in the early stage. He was beaten after 6 levels of Qi training and 5 levels. He also revealed that he has divine consciousness and can attack with divine consciousness, but he did not find it in so many foundation building stages on the field. Abandon it, abandon it, this kind of author is not worth spending money on.

I won't talk about the rhythm of the plot, but I just can't understand it. You didn't mention Bai Zichen's parents at all! Didn't even show up! You also said that Bai Zichen entered Taoism at the age of nine, but what about the first eight years? Eaten by 🐶? Don't you want to repay the kindness of your parents in raising you? You are so precocious, don't you understand? Otherwise, why would you take care of your uncle's family like this? Isn't he the one who took you up the mountain when you were 9 years old and protected you as you grew up? You haven't even forgotten Bai Ying and Bai Chongwu. Bai Ying is dead and his only son has no spiritual roots. If you give the proceeds from the core shop in Fangshi to his son, as long as he has spiritual roots for three generations, the proceeds will be his! Bai Ying is just your childhood friend, so you help him like this? Of course, it must be because of you, Bai Ying's mother! What about Bai Chongwu? You can help even one of your childhood followers, but you have forgotten your parents? ? ? ? I don't like the way you handle it here! I prefer other people's books. One is about staying with your parents until a hundred years, and then going to cultivate immortality without any worries! This book is about bringing parents to their side, with various miraculous medicines, and how to get them as long as the parents are satisfied! There is a saying in the book "A Hundred Years of Accompanying Parents" that says that cultivating immortality is first of all a human being. If you don't even have your parents, are you still a human being? A person who cultivates immortality has a long life, can he stay with his parents for more than a hundred years? The son wants to be raised but cannot be kissed! Don't you have inner demons? How can you become an immortal when you are not even a human being? The lamb is still kneeling to breastfeed! ! ! !

Everyone will know after reading it, it's so disgusting. The uncle is very kind to the protagonist, and then the protagonist gets the benefit and can help the uncle easily, but it ends up being delayed for three years before helping. The protagonist cultivated his spiritual consciousness in advance, and had clearly thought about it in his mind. He must not expose it and keep the secret. However, when someone came to provoke him, he directly used his spiritual consciousness. Isn't this stupid?

It's a pity to abandon it because it's tasteless. The plot is boring. I've forgotten the names of many supporting characters. I think there's something wrong with the protagonist. Let's talk about the protagonist's uncle first. Bai Zichen is described in the book as being very affectionate and righteous, and how his uncle is so kind to him. Just talking about it, this is a good thing. There are so many things that I haven't given to my uncle. Not to mention the treasures of heaven and earth, Po Erdan, you don't need to pretend to be a cow. As for your uncle, it won't be a problem to pile them up until the foundation is completed. Your ancestor is also good to you. Without them, you are still playing in the mud, let alone your biological parents. What kind of love can you create with unkindness and unrighteousness? The character of Chongyi is talking about you, the elder of your sect. Liang Yu cares so much about you. Are you interested in him? Just by saying that, the book only mentions Chongqing and Chongyi once when he goes to the Five Elements Sect. The other times, he just stands up a memorial arch and talks about your disciples. You don't even know whether the eldest disciple is dead or not. You don't even know how to save your life. I don't even leave any details at all. Villains will give their younger generations a way to save their lives. As for you, just ignore the flying swords and you are still the kind of bad street. Or you can set up your character to be ruthless and ruthless. It's disgusting if you can't write it down. When you beat others and seize treasures, you are a double-standard dog. When you destroy the Holy Lotus Sect, you don't distinguish between ourselves and the enemy.

I watched the short video and someone recommended it to be watched. It was said that it is comparable to the early genius Liuwu Shen of Cangtian Baihe. [Emot=default,20/] The article is simply wrong. I don't see how the pig's feet look like a natural fairy. The logic is also a bit inconsistent. If you change the name of a mortal, you can still be full of food and grass. If you give it a name of a natural fairy, I can only deduct another star for you.

I hope there is no heroine, I hope there is no heroine

I didn't want to comment at first, but Lu Song's secret realm in Chapter 120 was unreasonable. There was no fighting at all. Two top-quality treasures that would be needed in the future were replaced with foundation-building pills. If he thought about it from his perspective, if he wasn't afraid, all of these things would be his. It's better to add a fighting plot to make him think that he really can't do it. Or simply let him resent the protagonist for taking them all. To be honest, the way you prepared this big gift package was too blunt for a long time. Immortal Sword, Sword Box, and physical training techniques allow you to take advantage of all good things, and there is no difficulty at all. This is your flaw, there are too many details that cannot stand scrutiny.

QQ reading cannot take screenshots, but look at what the protagonist looks like.