Daojun: Start with the Top-grade Golden Elixir

What the hell is the devil plot about? That disgusting guy used a fragment to earn a skill and a complete magic weapon without any risk, without paying any price. He also erased the fact that he killed the protagonist for the first time, and the whole incident was borne by the protagonist. She got the biggest benefit but hid behind the scenes. For example, the girl planned to rob a bank and forced the protagonist to take action. The protagonist narrowly escaped death, injured and killed many security guards, and finally received a lot of benefits. The protagonist was the only one wanted later. The most disgusting thing is that the demon has not been completely removed. . . And what's the funniest thing? At the beginning, Yang Yu provoked the protagonist a few words. During the pursuit, the protagonist killed him before his life was in danger. When Yang Yu bribed him, the protagonist said that if he kills you, it will all be mine. Then it was changed to a woman, who once stabbed the protagonist in the back and almost died (the book didn't say how the protagonist survived). She took a fragment and asked the protagonist to forgive her. What's more disgusting? She killed the protagonist, and then someone asked her to apologize, so she lent the fragment to the protagonist (it was just a loan, and she could ask for it back at any time, which means that the protagonist's life is in her hands from now on). The protagonist did not agree, and then asked the protagonist to help him get a complete magic weapon in exchange for the fragment (yes, let's go through the logic, because she stabbed the protagonist in the back, she asked the protagonist To apologize, the method of apology is to let the protagonist exchange a complete magic weapon for a fragment. In order to obtain the magic weapon, the protagonist narrowly escaped death and offended the world's leading forces. In addition, the protagonist was asked to take out a loan and spend hundreds of thousands of spiritual coins to buy a mission item). In this way, the protagonist agreed. In the end, the witch got what she wanted and left in a fluttering way. All I can say is that it's great to be the female villain of this book. I will also be the female villain of this book in my next life. I will kill the protagonist's family tree first, and then say to the protagonist, do you want to forgive me? Give me a few fairy weapons and I'll ask you to forgive me. . . This is really the first time I heard that you can make a lot of money by apologizing.

Has anyone read a book similar to this one?

The writing in the early and middle stages was pretty good, but it's a pity that it didn't finish well.

The author made the protagonist a proud man of heaven, and then he was plotted against by a crippled man at the beginning. Later, he went to the demon sect for this matter. She exchanged a half-broken jade pendant magic weapon for a complete magic weapon. The protagonist also spent his own money to take pictures and bear the risk for the witch. This licking is so extreme that it is really seen. No wonder so many people subscribe to this book I can only say that the end of the universe is a dog-licking idiot protagonist.

What is up for auction is a box of Xuanmai that a fellow Taoist found in the Immortal Palace left over from ancient times..." The hall suddenly became noisy. The old man from the auction house waved his hand to tell everyone to be quiet and said, "You all must know the magical effect of Xuanmai. If you meet an opponent, it depends on who can last longer. If you eat a small piece of Xuanmai at this time, it is estimated that the opponent will immediately wallow in despair and give up. This kind of divine object cannot be measured by ordinary crystals?" Anyone who has treasures of the same price can also exchange them." "The auction begins now! The lowest price is 10,000 top quality immortal crystals" I'll give you 30,000 top quality fairy crystals! "I will give you 100,000 top-quality fairy crystals!" " "I'll produce a can of authentic Jiaduobao! "... Everyone was silent for a while, Jiaduobao, that is the best fairy crystal worth millions! "I'll give you a pack of spicy strips! "Just when everyone was sighing helplessly, a domineering voice came from the second floor of the auction hall! What! ! ! Everyone looked in disbelief when they heard this, what is the spicy strip? Then the world has not yet opened? Unparalleled divine objects bred in chaos, some supreme traditions that have been passed down for thousands of years may not be able to come up with one, let alone a package. Everyone is looking at the place where the sound comes from? I saw a man sitting there. He looked in his early twenties, and what was shocking was the logo on the robe he wore. "It turns out to be the mysterious and powerful Lanxiang Academy! And it is the most terrifying excavator series among them! Lan Xiang Academy! When people hear this name, the first thing they think of is powerful! ? It is said that a big teacher provoked a student from Lan Xiang's excavator department, and then the man used an excavator to crush him all the way. The mountain gate was shattered, the mountain guarding formation was as vulnerable as water tofu, and everyone in the sect was suppressed and killed! You must know that there are also characters in the tribulation period among them! You can imagine how scary the Lanxiang excavator is! No wonder this guy was able to take out a pack of spicy strips, they came from Lanxiang Academy! "Two packs"? Just heard a faint cry from another private room on the second floor? "What? Someone actually dares to challenge Lan Xiang Academy, and he can also bring out two packs of spicy chips! What kind of person is this?" Everyone started talking! I saw a young man in his early 20s, wearing white clothes without wind and a dazzling badge on his chest - New Oriental!

The plot of "Tian Mo" is really stupid. You won't be able to write the plot when you meet a woman, right?

The writing is amazing, to say the least. The world view is grand, and the elaboration and quotation of some classics are just right. There is neither the disadvantage of being pretentious nor over-interpretation. Not bad.

The writing is really good, very high-level, but it ends suddenly at the end, which is a pity. Xu Zhuang, the writing is really, very good.

First of all, there is no opponent who can really outperform the protagonist, and there is no sense of a battle between the avenues. I feel that the protagonist's early opportunities are not invincible, but for some reason, the opportunities of others are even worse than the protagonist's, and their underlying strength is much different. Secondly, the protagonist kills people just like killing chickens. In classical immortal cultivation, people who commit crimes that are not serious enough to die usually focus on suppression. The protagonist is too murderous and seems to support the protagonist's human rights aspect. He dares not to obey, which is too arrogant! Invincibility is too much! Finally, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just delete them. The entanglement with the witch is too awkward, and the witch is as stupid as the boy who delivers the treasure! If she is a villain, it is too harmless! [Emot=default,95/]

You kid, hurry up and write more.