Hogwarts Research Master

It's too watery. There are more than 20 chapters and I haven't even finished the branch. The next research may not have hundreds of chapters. You will read this book for the rest of your life, right?

After reading twenty chapters, at least three-quarters of each chapter was inferring this, inferring, and analyzing this and that, and the rest was just dialogue and plot advancement. I felt sleepy while reading.

Doesn't the author know? The Wood Orphanage was disbanded in the second year after Voldemort graduated and in the third year.

There is too much nonsense, just follow the plot line and reduce the narration and inner description content.

Although many people criticize it, I actually enjoy this kind of setting of fabricating characters to deceive the whole world. It's very logical, and the protagonist is also very cautious. He has always been tired of Long Aotian, the kind of little wizard who knows about the sorting ceremony and the Room of Requirement on the first night. I heard that the author is an old eunuch. You must continue.

The author's writing is great and his writing style is excellent, but there are a bit too many psychological activities and inferences, but it's still very interesting to read.

Water is not ordinary water. There are too many narrations about one thing, and it goes on and on endlessly. It is the most annoying to read this kind of book. It breaks down one thing into a lot of nonsense, and the author tells you everything he understands!

It's really pretty cool. The few pictures in a row are all about explaining the settings, and there's no plot advancement at all.

There are too many places in the narrative and I have to say it again.