My Years Teaching at Hogwarts

Harry Potter: "Avatar Gnaws the Big Melon"

A popular level Harry Potter fanfic. I want to have a little bit of all styles, and I also want to innovate and create new creations and new settings. However, the author is not good at it. If it is too divorced from the plot, it will be difficult to write down and record it as a running account. The minor revisions are almost the same as other novels. In essence, it still follows the plot... The good thing is that the characters are not broken, and there are not too many second creations that are deliberately mysterious. There is no bitter plot and deep hatred. On the topic, it progresses in a dry and orderly manner... This kind of article is a typical one where you can read the latest in one go, feel it is okay, and prepare to read it for a few days... But after you get used to it, you are not motivated enough to read it, and you feel it is not interesting... When you really read it again, it feels strange, because the previous plot is too watery and you have forgotten it, and the overall rhythm and outline lack coherence. It will not affect subsequent reading if you don't read the previous one. To sum it up, it's an average fanfic that will leave no one in the dark.

I want to show off, but I can't think of any novel plot. The writing is mediocre and the adjectives are particularly lacking. It's difficult to follow the plot and write. There are also many things that are simply the second set of two sets.

Overall, it's good. The most important thing is that this novel is finished.

Nothing toxic, not childish, just a novel for adults.

It was well written, but the ending was a bit rushed.

Good-looking, reasonable plot, rich content

Westerners love to eat Chinese food, and Westerners love to drink Chinese wine. Every place has its own eating habits. It's a bit embarrassing to forcefully write it down like this, and it's even more embarrassing to mention it frequently.

The protagonist is too cowardly. I don't even know what the use of improving your strength is. He's not Dumbledore and can't even fight. Are you also a saint? The Ministry of Magic is full of rubbish, and they don't dare to do anything to you. I don't even know what the protagonist is doing there.

It's okay, the plot mode is a bit old, I understand every critical moment