Mortal: I, Wen Tianren, Just Want to Live Forever!

Dear fellow Taoists, I have a plan: make the author a corpse puppet, take Azure Flower and Marrow Extracting Pills, and then apply the berserk spell to write 24 hours a day.

Are you a eunuch? From the introduction, I thought it would be about the spiritual world.

How to put it this way, at first I looked at the writing and everything else and it was pretty good, but when I looked at it I felt weird, because I basically didn't see how the male protagonist had practiced, and just played around with his concubine when he had nothing to do. It was obviously very urgent, but he seemed to be very calm and calm. Every time he got the loot, he didn't convert it into combat power. Every time, he found someone else to deal with it, or gave all the concubines as rewards, which gave me a very extraordinary feeling.

I really can't watch the rest of the story. The leveling is too harsh. When Han Li was in the early stage of forming the elixir, he was in the early stage of Nascent Soul. Han Li was in the late stage of forming the elixir. I really vomited. You should quickly become a puppet for the Six Paths. I don't know how many book friends you have lost with such a leveling breakthrough. I read a lot of people saying this in the comment section of other books. Your book is overrated. Anyway, I read it and it was really disgusting. What is the use of constantly increasing the combat power? When you look at a mortal, you only look at the realm. You keep upgrading his combat power. Is it so difficult to rise to the realm? What's more, you say that once you rise to the realm, you will be made into a puppet by the Six Paths. Then you won't do the same thing if you don't upgrade. The sooner you upgrade, the better. , He looks so annoyed

There is a Tiannan plot, it should be an anime. I love Song Yu.

This book would be good if there were less stories about having sex with women. Basically, most of it is about having sex with women. If you read too much, you will feel that it is not a novel about cultivating immortals.

I guess this point was earned because it made Han Li look like a fool. The protagonist is self-righteous

It's so watery. It's so watery at the beginning. It reaches its peak at almost 160 pictures before it's in the middle stage of Yuan Ying. It's updated to the end. It's just in the late stage of Yuan Ying. It's really a parallel import.

Why am I a member? The author please return my previous coins to me. Thank you for more updates.

Brother, update! ! ! You can say that you are writing, but you disappear. I am very worried about you. If you don't update, I will report you. I will say that you are missing.