Mortal: Imitation of Heavenly Spiritual Treasures

Old problem: There is a good setting or cheat code, but it is not developed. Like my brother, when writing a novel, I always think about the plot, plot or TMD plot. The development of Goldfinger really didn't pay attention to it at all. It's not like everyone. With our level of education, how many people can really write a good plot? Also, don't you always let the protagonist run around when it's time to develop? Construction and development itself are an attraction! What's more, the protagonist's golden finger is for refining weapons. Do I need you to refresh the map and fight frequently? What I want is your insights and highlights on weapon refining! ! ! ! I won't say too much, but you've had that golden finger in your hand for so long. May I ask, did you eat up the storage bag upgrade? Or is it very difficult? Even if you can't get a chip or something like that, are infrared glasses very difficult? If you can't think of this, then you always want to upgrade your daily needs like storage bags, right? But no! Therefore, the golden finger of the protagonist is just a decoration. The protagonist is like a puppet, without any sense of autonomy. Everyone is familiar with the novel "A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". So, is there anything else to watch in the subsequent plot? If you have a golden finger, you must develop it in depth, just like the previous chapters of "I'm a Mortal's Scientific Cultivation of Immortality", and firmly grasp the highlights, so that it will be attractive. The author does not need to come up with any new theories, at least at the application level, it should give people a feeling of enlightenment. Still have to work hard!

It's disgusting to write a fanfic and lick the original protagonist like crazy. He didn't dare to take advantage of any opportunity given to the protagonist of the original work, but he rushed up to give some good things to the protagonist of the original work.

It's really funny. Han Li's Foundation Establishment Pill should have been robbed. He is weak, has no background and talent, and his chances of establishing a foundation are almost zero in the eyes of outsiders. But the protagonist is different. You can't build a foundation with two spiritual roots and a special physique. Both spiritual roots will be robbed, and not just one or two, but all of them will be recycled. Do you think it is reasonable? This is not how you seek death. What if in the future, a few of the Foundation Establishment Pills and even their babies are born? Wouldn't they and their families not want to live?

The title of the novel was lost in vain, what is the synopsis? As a result, I made three auxiliary magic weapons in the early stage. There was no attack. I made a magic weapon-level immortal-killing flying knife in advance. The King Kong Dagger and the like can instantly or severely damage the core and then run away. It is a bit more satisfying. It is better than the frustrating plot of being captured and sneaked away by someone in the end. There is nothing wrong with this golden finger. There is such a sense of existence, it's not fun, there is Goldfinger, but the plot is full of rubbish, and the self-preservation ability is not enough, and the hair is wasted here and there. In the early stage, he didn't find a woman and was called a eunuch, and later he was raped by Nishang without any foreshadowing. It's a Goldfinger theme for nothing, but he doesn't have the writing skills, and he is far worse than Han Li

Are you lacking any extraneous things? There are imitations of Lingbao available, and I know how to refine weapons. I waste time studying puppets all day long, and think about going to the ruins to make puppets all day long. Wouldn't it be nice to do something meaningful with this time?

This is a common problem among fans: picking sesame seeds from a mountain of gold. The protagonist has a strange brain circuit and his golden finger is completely undeveloped. The coincidence rate with the main plot is over 95%.

The main character is written like a native, and it's all in vain. There are so many anti-innate spiritual treasures that can be used, but he can't even solve the dragon body. It's still a waste of time. Anyone who has read the book knows how to solve it.

Shennong comments: Advantages: The plot is smooth, the three views are positive but not the Virgin, the protagonist's character is stable, the golden finger has great potential, the upper and lower limits are very high, and there are many spaces and techniques that can be developed and written. Disadvantages: The same shortcomings as the original work, the price is a bit low. Attached is a picture of reasonable prices from my own collection!

How should I put it? It wouldn't be that interesting to travel to mortals and go to the Bloody Forbidden Land without having anything happen to Nangong Wan.

I don't think it's that powerful. The strong points of ancient magic weapons are not written out. Even if they are imitations, all kinds of pressures and forced plots are not exciting enough.