
Mortal: Starting from Luoyun Sect
About This Novel
Mortal Cultivation of Immortality Story Fan Lin Yi traveled through the mortal world, worked as an undercover agent of the Yuling Sect, and infiltrated the Luoyun Sect. He possesses the Cave Sky Sumeru Map, which can be used to teleport to various continents and secret realms. With this object, he successfully evaded Song Yu's magical power of "Transparent Spirit". Lin Yi is a cautious person and regards Han Li as a role model. He wants to complete the tasks of the Six Demonic Sects and completely get rid of the control of the Demonic Path. He walks on thin ice along the way. Many years later. Lu Luo: Everyone, this is the newly promoted Supreme Elder of Luoyun Sect-Lin Yi! Song Yu: Lin Yi, actually... I already knew you were an undercover agent. Han Li: Are you also a spy?
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Official(37)Scraped 2d ago
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Let's just fall in love and follow the story of Cultivation of Immortality. The aloof Song Yu will turn into a shy and obedient girl when you come to your place. Xxx Are you writing a romance novel? ?
The author is awesome. He practiced Qi for 12 levels at the beginning and spent more than 70 chapters building the foundation. The level of card leveling has been played to the extreme. I still want to get good grades if I write a fanfic like this! Now is not suitable for this slow pace
Fighter in the garbage
I asked you to write a story about a mortal's cultivation of immortality as an article about urban life. There is so much nonsense.
Don't talk about love when writing about mortals. Mortals are cultivating immortals, and the main focus is immortality. Why does Han Laomo reject so many people? It's because he loves cultivating immortals so much and wants to live forever.
The author has leveled up, has two spiritual roots, and has not yet established a foundation.
It feels like the card level is high. It's been so long and I still haven't built a foundation. Boss, have you forgotten about it? For a fanfic, are you like those who start with four spiritual roots and cultivate the land, write more than a hundred chapters to build the foundation, and others will become Nascent Souls after more than a hundred chapters? . . .
I feel like I've seen a female video, and I keep talking about it in bits and pieces.
It's really bad. A novel about cultivating immortals has turned into an ambiguous article about life.
There are also those who give five-star reviews. I know most of them are from small accounts, but real readers will only give low scores.
Sixty years have passed since the demonic invasion. Has Song Yu only refined his Qi to the 12th level?
Mortal fandom doesn't necessarily have to have too many interactions with Old Demon Han, as long as the logic is clear and the plot is exciting.
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Community(0)
Official(37)Scraped 2d ago
Lightning protection
Let's just fall in love and follow the story of Cultivation of Immortality. The aloof Song Yu will turn into a shy and obedient girl when you come to your place. Xxx Are you writing a romance novel? ?
The author is awesome. He practiced Qi for 12 levels at the beginning and spent more than 70 chapters building the foundation. The level of card leveling has been played to the extreme. I still want to get good grades if I write a fanfic like this! Now is not suitable for this slow pace
Fighter in the garbage
I asked you to write a story about a mortal's cultivation of immortality as an article about urban life. There is so much nonsense.
Don't talk about love when writing about mortals. Mortals are cultivating immortals, and the main focus is immortality. Why does Han Laomo reject so many people? It's because he loves cultivating immortals so much and wants to live forever.
The author has leveled up, has two spiritual roots, and has not yet established a foundation.
It feels like the card level is high. It's been so long and I still haven't built a foundation. Boss, have you forgotten about it? For a fanfic, are you like those who start with four spiritual roots and cultivate the land, write more than a hundred chapters to build the foundation, and others will become Nascent Souls after more than a hundred chapters? . . .
I feel like I've seen a female video, and I keep talking about it in bits and pieces.
It's really bad. A novel about cultivating immortals has turned into an ambiguous article about life.
There are also those who give five-star reviews. I know most of them are from small accounts, but real readers will only give low scores.
Sixty years have passed since the demonic invasion. Has Song Yu only refined his Qi to the 12th level?
Mortal fandom doesn't necessarily have to have too many interactions with Old Demon Han, as long as the logic is clear and the plot is exciting.









