Mortal: Han Li Who Returned from the Mortal World
by Newbies To Book Writing, Please Don't Complain.
About This Novel
Erluzi had a dream. In the dream, by chance, he embarked on the path of cultivation, opened the sea of suffering, cast the Tao Palace, refined the four poles, turned his spine into a dragon, and climbed to the Immortal Platform in one leap... He rose up along the way and defeated all enemies of the same level. The Eastern Wasteland Divine Body, the Heavenly Demon Body, the Holy Body, the Chaos Body... The legendary tyrannical bodies all crawled at his feet. In this life, Han Li killed no one who dared to respect him. In the end, he became the Great Emperor, conquering ten thousand realms with one power, and could not find an opponent in the vast world. He was the pinnacle of independent humanity. Time flies like an arrow, and time flies like a shuttle. He is tempering in the rolling world of mortals, witnessing the departure of old friends one after another, with gray hair on his temples and dying years. He starts one life after another when the oil is exhausted and the lamp is dry, and he never dies until one day... He wakes up from the dream. "Dream?" Han Li looked at the black roof made of thatch and mud, as well as the old quilt covering his body, and murmured to himself until he felt the Wheel of Life under his navel. ... Many years later. Lord Dayan: "Why do you feel like you are the real old monster?" Star Palace Twin Saints: "If Tianxing City is sunk, all life will be destroyed. Senior Han, please think twice." Xiang Zhili: "Senior Brother Han, quickly collect your magical powers, the great path will be wiped out." Bingfeng: "Brother Han is really the reincarnation of a true immortal." ... Wearing the crown of the Emperor of Heaven and the robe of the Emperor of Heaven, all the immortals kowtowed, and the Taoist ancestor lowered his eyebrows. PS: Pianpi's fourth mortal fanfic is a masterpiece, not to be missed.
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Official(48)Scraped 1mo ago
Because I like the character Han Li, I endured reading 70 chapters but I couldn't stand it any longer. It was just plagiarism. I plagiarized a little bit of this and copied a little of that. The number of words was completely based on the original plot. There was no framework or self-composition at all. Why did you spend money on such a bad novel?
The book is very good, but it can't be called "emperor" or "emperor", it's very vulgar, and one of the most disgusting things about it is the title of "emperor"
The realm of skills in each world is the one with the highest degree of compatibility in this world. It also evolved according to the rules of this world. So it is useless in other worlds. Doesn't fit.
The setting is interesting, but the plot is a bit stiff. You need to grasp the subsequent plot carefully. If you don't grasp it well, basically this book won't have many highlights.
So verbose! The world of dreams... Three sentences are inseparable from the world of dreams
It's well written. I hope there will be a different spirit and fairy world from the original work.
The current impression is okay. With the encouragement of five stars, I hope to keep up the good work.
The two most disgusting comments in this book. ① Compare your strengths across books with different worldviews, thinking that you are right and others must follow what he says. ② When teaching an author to write a book, you must follow what he says. He alone represents the public, and his needs are the needs of the public.
Isn't this a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality? It's still the same after revisions.
The most annoying thing about this book is that the author has been criticizing the writing method so many times that people abandoned the book and ruined their meals.
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Official(48)Scraped 1mo ago
Because I like the character Han Li, I endured reading 70 chapters but I couldn't stand it any longer. It was just plagiarism. I plagiarized a little bit of this and copied a little of that. The number of words was completely based on the original plot. There was no framework or self-composition at all. Why did you spend money on such a bad novel?
The book is very good, but it can't be called "emperor" or "emperor", it's very vulgar, and one of the most disgusting things about it is the title of "emperor"
The realm of skills in each world is the one with the highest degree of compatibility in this world. It also evolved according to the rules of this world. So it is useless in other worlds. Doesn't fit.
The setting is interesting, but the plot is a bit stiff. You need to grasp the subsequent plot carefully. If you don't grasp it well, basically this book won't have many highlights.
So verbose! The world of dreams... Three sentences are inseparable from the world of dreams
It's well written. I hope there will be a different spirit and fairy world from the original work.
The current impression is okay. With the encouragement of five stars, I hope to keep up the good work.
The two most disgusting comments in this book. ① Compare your strengths across books with different worldviews, thinking that you are right and others must follow what he says. ② When teaching an author to write a book, you must follow what he says. He alone represents the public, and his needs are the needs of the public.
Isn't this a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality? It's still the same after revisions.
The most annoying thing about this book is that the author has been criticizing the writing method so many times that people abandoned the book and ruined their meals.
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Two stars The writing is at least good, but I can only give it two stars. The setting is almost like a mortal fairy in a dream, so here comes the problem. In the original work, Han Li has just embarked on the path of spiritual cultivation, so it is reasonable that he cannot resolve the evil poisoned by Mr. Mo. The protagonist of this book has memories that are almost like those of a mortal immortal, and he cannot resolve them? We still have to find Nuanyu.
As a mortal, Han Li dreams of covering the sky and becomes a mortal immortal. When he wakes up from the dream, he starts from scratch. In the early stage, he can still see the character of the original Gou. He shows his invincible style in the divine bridge realm. A generation of mortal emperor suppresses the world and leads the human race to rise. The contrast is very exciting.
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