Mortal: Become a Disciple of Layman Qingyi at the Beginning

Difficulty 1: The ultimate goal of every character in Mortal is to achieve the highest level, but some characters give up or indulge halfway, so achieving the highest level is the main line! In the name of making up for the "regrets", many fans adopt paper characters with all kinds of obscene intentions in the harem. To do so without meaning will only make people sick. Difficulty 2: Each character has a distinct personality, which is difficult to change among fans. (Novel plus animation) For example, the layman Qingyi in this novel wants to accept Han Li because of the Xutian Cauldron. He will never accept a disciple out of good intentions. Otherwise, why do you think he, a Nascent Soul monk, has always been a casual cultivator and has never had an apprentice? The only explanation is that it's not necessary. In his eyes, it can only go one step further. So it's best to add a background here: Master Qingyi once had the same experience as you, and he pulled you in because of the situation. He can become a demon monk by no means a kind person. If you bring him into Han Li, he will at most save your life, but he will never accept you as his disciple. In addition, Yuanying's recruitment of disciples is by no means a charity, it must have its own purpose. This should be thought clearly before writing. Difficulty 3: Reader selection: "Reincarnation Han Li Little Green Bottle Controversy". In fact, I think this point is completely unnecessary. This issue is the chicken or the egg argument. If Samsara Han Li can come to the past at any time, then there is no need for all mortal fans to write anymore. Difficulty 4: How to deal with the "protagonist" relationship between Erchuang and Han Li. Han Li is generally more positive. If he kills Han Li, most readers will probably run away. This is a significant difference from Douluo. My suggestion here is to seize the "companion". The companion is not necessarily a Taoist companion, but can also be a Taoist friend who helps each other. Brother, there are many colleagues here who write like this and you can copy the homework. Difficulty point 5: What is the fun part of the second creation? If you just follow the same plot as the original, everyone will be tired of watching it in a few minutes. It is better to go back and read the original. My suggestion here is to grasp the two words "creation" and "change". Finally, I wish all fan authors to get rich, write classics, and write original works!

If you make acquaintance with someone casually, you will treat each other with sincerity and become a good person. This is a common problem among ordinary people.

Mrs. Wen was going to kill you before you fell into the ghost mist, and you still took him out. You were like a fighting dog among licking dogs.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I came back to my senses. After all, layman Qingyi is a non-traditional cultivator of the Nascent Soul Stage. He has been in the Chaotic Star Sea for hundreds of years. He has been involved in intrigues for who knows how many years. Will he help the protagonist of this book for no reason? Even when the Xutian Palace wanted to accept a disciple, Han Li did so only because he had a white jade spider that could help him get the tripod. Otherwise, why didn't Han Li accept a disciple for hundreds of years before, but why did the protagonist of this book immediately accept a disciple? Does love generate electricity?

It was so disgusting to see Nangong Wan here that I didn't want to read anymore.

The author's writing skills are so bad that he cannot support the whole story. This is manifested in the fact that he speaks in plain language throughout the whole article. He often blushes and complains about what he didn't expect. It is really not pleasant. I have read more than 30 chapters and I haven't found any opportunities. I know you are talking about the system, but the existence of this system is really not high. Moreover, the protagonist claims that he can sign in to many elixirs and magical herbs, and then says that he has not taken the elixirs. When he meets a woman, he looks at her breasts and thighs. Are you still cultivating immortality? Dao's heart is not stable at all, and he actually mentioned "I don't know the prices in Tiannan." I ask you, are you writing this fanfic without reading the original work?

The author can reveal his licking-dog nature everywhere, including selling things, including five foundation-building pills, additional formations, and several sets of top-notch defensive and offensive weapons during the foundation-building period, which sold for 9,500 spiritual stones. In the following chapters, it will be written that a foundation-building pill requires several thousand spiritual stones. Is it just because the other party was beautiful and seduced him a few times during the sale?

1. You must have your own golden fingers, you must have your own creativity, you must have your own technology, and you must be innovative and fresh like Huawei. (The Heavenly Vase is the golden finger) (Dayan Shenjun's technology is the consciousness puppet) (Qing Yuanzi's creativity is the sword array) 2. Opportunities come through hard work, taking risks, using your brain to plan, and having a brain. (The opportunity is given casually, I would never dare to do this in my dreams, it is unrealistic) 3. It must be consistent with the character design. Yuanying old monsters are all smart people, don't write them as fools. (Jiejiejie is the Soul Palace, Mama is the aunt, Thief Hahaha is the Blackbeard, each character has his own personality.)

It's just mediocre, and it's rated as useless. Better to bite the lighter And the basic skills are also very average. I can only say to watch more and practice more.

You keep giving the Miaoyin Sect things, monster materials and so on, but you don't take the sect's things, as if you are raising them, so why do you want the Miaoyin Sect.