Mortal: Rebirth of Mo Fengwu

The advantages and disadvantages of this book are quite obvious. The advantage is actually that he is supported by his peers. The other mortals are so disgusting that they either kneel down and lick Han Li, or give away his daughter, or they are just brainless. Apart from anything else in this book, the protagonist's superficial friendship with Han Li is mainly for use and calculation (of course, he has no harmful intentions), he does not act sloppily, he bows his head when he can't beat him, and he doesn't show any mercy when he can beat him. He is a protagonist with intelligence, ambition and action. But the shortcomings of this book did dissuade me. First of all, there are some characters, such as Han Li. Although he is not a good person, he is not a devil either. The protagonist pulls Han Li to actively set up traps to kill people and seize treasures. Han Li cannot do such a thing, at least Han Li in the early stage will not do such things. He is basically the one who is killed to seize treasures and then fights back and explodes with gold coins. The second is the confusing behavior of the protagonist in the early and middle stages. You must know that the protagonist's cheats are very unnatural, and they are not the only one. The cheats will be updated as the realm breaks through. So in the early stage, it is reasonable for the protagonist to forcefully enter the Yellow Maple Valley in order to break through the foundation building. It is really difficult for casual cultivators to obtain the foundation building pill. If you don't enter, it will be easy to get stuck. However, it is clear that the foundation is about to be built, but the protagonist suddenly interrupts the reverse training of the skills in order to enter the Bloody Forbidden Land. Is this reasonable? When the protagonist reaches foundation building, he will naturally have new plug-ins. Why must he take such a big risk? It is possible to get carried away by practicing the reverse technique and send it directly, and there are Xiang Zhili and Nangong Wan in the Bloody Forbidden Land, and there are also many people with mixed eyes. When the protagonist signs in later, there is indeed a lot of movement. It can be said that if you are not careful, you will become a god. Therefore, the protagonist's behavior is very confusing. The protagonist's failure is not a one-time failure. There will naturally be new failures when the foundation is established. Entering the bloody forbidden land is extremely risky and has many uncertainties. As a result, the protagonist has to take this risk and is speechless. Then there is the plot. After the protagonist builds the foundation, he is forced by Hongfu to learn the dual cultivation technique. Although he is forced, the protagonist realizes that the effect of spreading the power in the technique helps to cultivate the external incarnation. Then the protagonist begins to learn this technique half-forced and half-intentionally, and also wants to get the opportunity of the Yue Emperor. At that time, I couldn't complain. The protagonist had a lot of troubles, and he still missed the incarnation of this version of a beggar within a beggar. How is this different from sitting on the delicacies of the mountains and seas but thinking about the pig food in the pig pen (the protagonist's hangups are only as big as the Yue Emperor's opportunities). At that time, I felt that the author would not be able to write the original plot without Han Li, but later the protagonist went to Luoyun Sect, so he did not abandon the book on the spot. Finally, there is the protagonist's thoughts. I actually don't care whether the protagonist is a good character or a villain, but you can't make people sick. The protagonist has a plot in the early stage that is actually quite jarring. The protagonist has insufficient cultivation, so in order to go to Yellow Maple Valley, he uses a talisman to pass the test. It turns out that the talisman is at the Nascent Soul level. The protagonist knows that he cannot keep it, so he actively offers the talisman in exchange for the qualification to enter the Yellow Maple Valley and the identity of a pill-forming disciple. The problem with this plot is that the protagonist knows how precious the talisman is, and he also knows that he cannot enter the Yellow Maple Valley without relying on the talisman. Therefore, before the Ascension Conference begins, the protagonist plans to expose the talisman and let it go, in exchange for the opportunity to enter the Yellow Maple Valley. Notice! This process was actively planned by the protagonist! Taking the initiative to expose and give up the talisman is the protagonist's own plan. The talisman is originally the price for the protagonist to achieve his goal. As a result, after the Fu Bao was given away, the protagonist felt a hatred for Hongfu in his heart. He felt that this was a revenge for "treasure grabbing". It was disgusting to see this plot at the time. Is this a treasure grabbing? On the surface, yes. But in fact, this is the price that the protagonist himself actively planned! You insist on entering Yellow Maple Valley, and you plan to let the talisman out, but the result is that someone else takes the treasure and holds a grudge. This is very disgusting. For example, the protagonist's academic performance is average (insufficient cultivation), and then at the cost of money and energy (Fu Bao), he finds a tutor (Hong Fu), and successfully passes the 985 (Yellow Maple Valley) exam that he originally failed to pass. However, the protagonist turns away and wants to report the tutor and asks for a refund of the tutoring fee (Hong Fu feels that the other party has a grudge against the treasure). After such a comparison, you can understand why the plot was disgusting at that time, right? It's not just me, everyone in the comment section disagrees. It can be said that this book has a lot of minor points. In addition to the above, there are also some details. For example, in the Ascension Conference, in the original book, the main character is a duel between two people, and the result is a wheel battle arena competition. Isn't this nonsense? Some readers took screenshots of the original work, but the author refused to admit it in the comment area, saying that it was a fan setting and so on. But this book does have its merits, especially when compared with other fans. So I still give it three stars. I hope the author will write better and better. Or the next book can learn from experience and write a masterpiece for mortals.

It's too big and changes at any time. It's just whatever you want, so it's not interesting anymore.

The author replied, is Han Li the male protagonist, the female protagonist, or single?

This book depicts Hong Fu as a ferocious god, and the other as Samsara Daozu looks like an angel. Reading the two books together, I almost lost my mind😥

In order to follow the plot, Mo Juren just ignored it😦 and just called me daddy.

Comrade author, when did Zi Ling keep her secret relationship with Old Demon Han? Because she couldn't stop practicing the God Refining Technique, she would fly to the immortal world.

It's not very good, and people who watch it feel frustrated.

Men wearing women's clothing, or women wearing women's clothing? It's over, it's over

Some of it is well written, and some of it is extremely poisonous. Taking Qi Yunxiao, Xin Ruyin, and Xiaomei to Luan Xinghai, they sent Qi-training elixirs, foundation-building elixirs, foundation-building elixirs, and time-strengthening elixir resources. Then he shared the top-quality spiritual stone veins on Biling Island with them. The best nanny among nannies The protagonist is reborn from a man on Earth to Mo Fengwu, a woman from the mortal world. Later, the author writes about his parents who have been reincarnated for several lives. They also have parents, brothers and sisters in this life. He used a golden finger to take away the three souls and seven souls of their reincarnations through the air. He also said that he would help these two mortal souls without spiritual roots to seize their bodies and cultivate the bodies of immortals. When I wrote the plot of Mo Juren, the adoptive father of Qixuanmen, I also clearly wrote the three iron rules: mortals cannot take away the bodies of those who want to become immortals.

Except for the slow improvement in realm, everything else is fine.